Things Ain'T Right In Oz

In Oz most things had a glitch:
Like bricks from red to yellow did switch;
 - Monkey things
 - with flyin’ wings;
And ...  the water’s bad – ask the witch!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/6/2014 9:38:00 PM
hahaha, AWesome last line, and it's the one that is most important. Loved the monkey things too!!!
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Date: 5/22/2014 3:19:00 PM
Ha! Love it!...
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Jack Clark
Date: 5/22/2014 3:30:00 PM
Sometimes, Arlene, when I write stuff like this ... I really wonder if I left my mind in my other shirt ...? HA! Thank you for kind words. Jack C.
Date: 5/21/2014 7:59:00 PM
Funny
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Jack Clark
Date: 5/21/2014 10:14:00 PM
Hi Farhana! I'm glad you found it humorous ... and I thank you for stopping by and leaving your comment! Jack C
Date: 5/21/2014 1:02:00 PM
Jack, hehehe... I'm an OZ fan, so this brings me to admire this more even more... I'd ask the witch, but she is gone...LOL.. I do love the switching, and chasing from red to yellow bricks... xool...POEM...Linda
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Date: 5/21/2014 5:11:00 PM
ok
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Jack Clark
Date: 5/21/2014 3:54:00 PM
Thank you, Your Linda-ship! I've been a fan of the "OZ" for decades and decades ... as a matter of fact, I can't recall anyone I know NOT being a fan! Thanks again for your kind words ... Jack C
Date: 5/21/2014 10:54:00 AM
lol very funny limerick
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Date: 5/21/2014 11:45:00 AM
Now that I'm out of "OZ", I can reply to your kind comment ... Thank you so much. From a talent such as you, I'm most appreciative of your words! Jack C
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