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Things Ain'T Right In Oz

In Oz most things had a glitch: Like bricks from red to yellow did switch; - Monkey things - with flyin’ wings; And ... the water’s bad – ask the witch!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2014 9:38:00 PM

hahaha, AWesome last line, and it's the one that is most important. Loved the monkey things too!!!

Arlene Smith

Date: 5/22/2014 3:19:00 PM

Ha! Love it!...

Jack Clark
Date: 5/22/2014 3:30:00 PM

Sometimes, Arlene, when I write stuff like this ... I really wonder if I left my mind in my other shirt ...? HA! Thank you for kind words. Jack C.

Farhana Akter

Date: 5/21/2014 7:59:00 PM

Funny

Jack Clark
Date: 5/21/2014 10:14:00 PM

Hi Farhana! I'm glad you found it humorous ... and I thank you for stopping by and leaving your comment! Jack C

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2014 1:02:00 PM

Jack, hehehe... I'm an OZ fan, so this brings me to admire this more even more... I'd ask the witch, but she is gone...LOL.. I do love the switching, and chasing from red to yellow bricks... xool...POEM...Linda

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/21/2014 5:11:00 PM

Jack Clark
Date: 5/21/2014 3:54:00 PM

Thank you, Your Linda-ship! I've been a fan of the "OZ" for decades and decades ... as a matter of fact, I can't recall anyone I know NOT being a fan! Thanks again for your kind words ... Jack C

Nathan D.

Date: 5/21/2014 10:54:00 AM

lol very funny limerick

Jack Clark
Date: 5/21/2014 11:45:00 AM

Now that I'm out of "OZ", I can reply to your kind comment ... Thank you so much. From a talent such as you, I'm most appreciative of your words! Jack C