Things Ain'T Right In Oz

In Oz most things had a glitch:
Like bricks from red to yellow did switch;
 - Monkey things
 - with flyin’ wings;
And ...  the water’s bad – ask the witch!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 9:38 PM
hahaha, AWesome last line, and it's the one that is most important. Loved the monkey things too!!!
Smith Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 3:19 PM
Ha! Love it!...
Clark Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 3:30 PM
Sometimes, Arlene, when I write stuff like this ... I really wonder if I left my mind in my other shirt ...? HA! Thank you for kind words. Jack C.
Akter  Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 7:59 PM
Funny
Clark Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 10:14 PM
Hi Farhana! I'm glad you found it humorous ... and I thank you for stopping by and leaving your comment! Jack C
A   Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 1:02 PM
Jack, hehehe... I'm an OZ fan, so this brings me to admire this more even more... I'd ask the witch, but she is gone...LOL.. I do love the switching, and chasing from red to yellow bricks... xool...POEM...Linda
A   Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 5:11 PM
ok
Clark Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 3:54 PM
Thank you, Your Linda-ship! I've been a fan of the "OZ" for decades and decades ... as a matter of fact, I can't recall anyone I know NOT being a fan! Thanks again for your kind words ... Jack C
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May 21, 2014 at 10:54 AM
lol very funny limerick
Clark Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 11:45 AM
Now that I'm out of "OZ", I can reply to your kind comment ... Thank you so much. From a talent such as you, I'm most appreciative of your words! Jack C
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