Things

He was enamored by the way of things,
the color, the shape, the sound
and all that his senses could take in
whether the thing was large or small
or in-between or was superior
in the hierarchical order of things.

A raindrop clinging to a leaf
bloated with sunlight and about to fall, 
the taste of celery, cold and sprinkled 
with a little salt, all manner found a way
into his world where they were 
given space to be, 

some catching a glint of light 
from places too subtle to find voice
within the limits of a word,
but only in things made
into something more, silhouettes 
of symbol, simile and metaphor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Swan Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 5:43 AM
I love your spotlight landing on random things in the character's day, the raindrop, the celery. The raindrop bloated with sunlight and about to fall is my favourite phrase - I can see it, and the pleasure of describing it. Also the ending with the silhouettes is lovely, capturing that connection between reality words, and associations. To me this is an invitation to poetry. Fave. J :)
Willason Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 3:00 AM
Thankyou so much Jeanette for your thoughtful and informed comments...its a treat for a poem to be afforded such attention. Value your comments my friend and for giving the poem a FAV blessing. Take care, Paul
Lane Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 10:59 AM
You pay attention to details, Paul and that's the mark of a sage poet. Too often the beauty of little things is ignored, and therein lies the pity of a world in a rush. In your poetry, you never take things for granted, and you allow your readers to have a glimpse of them, too. Thank you.
Willason Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 2:53 AM
You give me honor with your most generous words Lin...thankyou sincerely. Such strengthens a sometimes waning confidence that my poetry has something to offer. Sincerely value your support dear friend.
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