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Thieves In the Night

Our son CJ celebrated his 40th birthday, Immediate family invited to Ramsgate In Natal, to celebrate this day in a special way, A guest house was rented by our son, Which once again became our fate! By the sea, what a wonderful view to see, We arrived last Monday, and the fun, Immediately begun. Evenings, we took turns to cook, I took a book, How silly always something to do, Like children we even played pass the parcel, We all wanted to win even Marcel, Who I had never met, but I won the voucher. We played 30 seconds, this game Made you think, Somewhat quick, If you have played it you will know One of the greatest family games, Under our sun, Which revs. adrenalin, such fun! We watched Netflix, had a photo shoot, Went down to the sea, a mere stones Throw away, So every day Was filled with excitement, and our meals We ate on a deck, overlooking the sea, Thought we were safe, but there were eyes Looking at everyone from the bushes Including at my husband and me! On the Friday night and Saturday night, I smelt incense burning from outside, Which I mentioned to my husband, But we paid no attention to this sweet smell, We went to bed And as soon as our head Touched the pillow. We dropped off to sleep, Certainly, no fear, That danger was near! We were ten in the house and five big dogs, The next morning my husband stretched out For his phone, We felt quite comfortable, like being at home, But there was no phone, Mine wasn’t there either, nor were our, Cameras, our computers, our binoculars, My jewellery, and a host of other things My bag, my husband’s hearing aids And his brief case, I looked at my husbands’ ghostly white face, We had been robbed whilst we slept, That incense smell came from them Making sure humans and any pet, Fell fast asleep! No one heard anything, not even a beep. And the dogs didn’t bark, It was pitch dark. I felt sickened at the thought Of someone looking over us With perhaps a knife, Endangering each of our lives. They had watched us for two days, Whilst they burnt this mixture Probably obtained from a Sangoma,* Which opened up the box of Pandora! They got in through wide spaced Burglar bars, and stripped us. The police came and then the detectives, The whole day spent assessing our loss And finger prints taken galore From door knobs and cupboards, And footprints from the floor. Had to travel back with no phone, So on our way back home, Could not phone our children On our five hundred mile journey, Who stressed, This was another test, Which we had to face, But with God’s grace, All things are possible But what evil arrogance and persistence, These thieves had, as they entered our Bedroom, they felt this was their right, Thieves in the night! *Sangoma – a traditional healer or diviner

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Date: 3/22/2022 6:14:00 AM
This experience of yours sounds so terrifying ! To be robbed off so many valuables and indispensable things all at once might have shocked you to death ! So the enjoyment over your son's birthday turned out to be a nightmare at the end. Is it fictional or real ! This sounds so very real.... ! Somehow God gave you the strength to take everything without losing composure !I feel for your loss sweet one !
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Date: 6/2/2021 7:07:00 PM
Oh, my dearest Jennifer.. your poem is absolutely heart-wrenching and terrifying. Such a scary situation, such a violation and such a loss of the sense of security. Thank God, you and yours were not physically hurt. You tell of "thieves in the night" with your captivating artistic pen that spills with poetic gold - riches no thief can ever steal from you, my sweet and gifted poetry sis. Did you receive my recent soup mail? Warmest wishes, love and hugs.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/25/2021 9:41:00 PM
Oh my Jennifer. Was this a second time that you were robbed? I cannot believe this. I don't think I would be too quick to travel anymore after that. A so called friend stole my money out of my bag as she sat in my car next to my purse when I got out to feed the parking meter. $700.00 Never took her anywhere again. But I just let go and let God handle it. What else can you do. God Bless my friend. JB
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Date: 5/25/2021 7:26:00 AM
A story so scary Jenni... I hope it is just a story... Oh those arrogant thieves.... Sorry Jenni I am not so active in Soup in my comments... not finding time to read poems... as am in my native place right now... Stay safe during these tough times dear friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 5/22/2021 8:13:00 PM
So scary... such feelings of violation to overcome... Stay safe, Jennifer. :) gw
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Date: 5/20/2021 5:58:00 PM
This story just made me shiver to think of someone standing over you and stealing your items. Oh my I would be freaking out. Thank God your were kept safe and items can be replaced. A horrible experience. love phyl
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Date: 5/20/2021 2:25:00 PM
what a terrifying experience, so glad no one was hurt, possessions can be replaced but people cant:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/20/2021 1:09:00 PM
Oh, my, incense burning from outside. Every way they can think of to rob a person. It isn't right. But, you are safe.
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Date: 5/20/2021 8:26:00 AM
Thieves consider stealing their work. They earn money by taking what's not is theirs. One day they will get their just reward.
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Date: 5/18/2021 7:37:00 AM
I was enjoying the fun game adrenalin line but soon began the dramatic suspenseful story, a partypooper described in a very captivating way indeed. Natal now where in the world is that, such heartless horrible thieves to steal everything even hearing aids ahh sad!! And how crafty cunning to put you to sleep dogs and all with just a smell n smoke gahhh!! An adventure gone so awry but so worth writing about, is it all true??
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Date: 5/18/2021 7:37:00 AM
Cont/... And Wide spaced burglar bars do sound fishy. Thank God none of you were harmed yeah man. Kudos!!! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 5/18/2021 4:11:00 AM
- I read this as a story from reality, dear Jenny - (hope it is not) - It's horrible !!! - An experience that would feel like an abuse in the worst way - I hope everything is fine with you and your family - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/17/2021 12:59:00 PM
WOW!!! What a story/write. So sorry. Thieves/evil always use the night and not the day. Thank God you are OK. Things can be replace. All the red tape is a pain. Good Luck. Have a blessed day.....................
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Date: 5/17/2021 11:34:00 AM
Such a scary experience, Jennifer. But thank God you and your family were unharmed. Kindest regards, Evelyn
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Date: 5/17/2021 8:26:00 AM
That’s horrible. I’m glad you are both okay. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 5/17/2021 8:02:00 AM
Well written...I was left shocked as I read...Such a dangerous experience you had with your family. But thank God everyone was safe after it all.
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Date: 5/17/2021 5:53:00 AM
What a horrific story, dearest Jennifer. Fortunately, you are alive! A few days ago thieves entered the house of a young couple here in Athens that had a little girl and robbed them, unfortunately, they killed the mother. Thank God you were saved. I pray not to be in a situation like this. A captivating narration! God bless you and your family.
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Date: 5/17/2021 3:43:00 AM
Wow Jennifer... so sad and scary... what a horrible predicament! This is why people are so fearful these days... I'm glad they didn't hurt anyone. God bless you always, Love to you, Gina
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Date: 5/16/2021 4:26:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... crikey! Very scary indeed. The same thing happened to my brother in his own home. While all slept a burglar stole his wallet etc. off his bedside table. The experience you had is not only painful but the thought of what could have happened will linger for some time - thank you Jennifer for sharing this verse - Lindsay
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Date: 5/16/2021 10:57:00 AM
Hi Jennifer, What a horrible thing to go through. It’s sad we live in a world where such things happen. Things can be replaced, I’m a so happy that you and your family lived to tell the story. I’m sorry you had to go through this my friend- Alexis
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Date: 5/16/2021 12:37:00 AM
An exceptional story telling encapsulated in a fantastic poem! Excellent penning!
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Date: 5/15/2021 4:37:00 PM
wow, Jennifer. OMG. What an unbelievable experience for you all. Thank goodness this did not happen in your house, they'd have stolen every thing you guys owned. It's incredible even the dogs did nothing. wow.
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Date: 5/15/2021 1:06:00 PM
Wow Jennifer, what a terrifying experience for you all, im just glad that you all slept through it, it doesn't bear thinking about. Hope your okay. Tom
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