These Hallowed Fields

The crack of the bat,
The roar of the crowd,
The smell of the earth,
In these hallowed fields.

The taste of the hotdog,
The sun in my face,
The warm gentle breeze,
In these hallowed fields.

The windup of the pitcher,
The call of the ump,
The anger of the batter,
In these hallowed fields. 

The cheer of good friends,
The closeness of family,
The kiss of my spouse,
In these hallowed fields.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Thomas Avatar
May 20, 2025 at 1:51 AM
This poem uses epiphora/epistrophe. It repeats a phrase at the end of each stanza. The meter is regular and constant.
Maverick Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 2:18 PM
A piece redolent with gamesmanship trying Winning and of unloved loss.' Really good Lanier.'
Thomas Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 4:34 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for reading.
Poet Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 7:18 AM
A great poem about the deep connection and sense of reverence you feel for the game of baseball and the experiences associated with it. Well done, Lanier
Agustin Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 5:55 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Thomas Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 6:08 AM
Thanks! I truly am.
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