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These Feelings Aren'T a Friend

There's an uneasiness in the air nerve endings ending sensation an unwell redness pooling no pretend the pace quickens and there's more space than there's ever been I know these feelings and they're not a friend but this won't last and I'll fight past until the next time and the next "Love don't live here anymore" you have to breathe if you want to live but can you ever live if you're not loved I inhale and it feels good I'll keep holding on to hope like I know I should

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Date: 10/21/2018 5:25:00 PM
Tim you have more friends than you realise, always here for you....Seren
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Date: 10/17/2018 11:50:00 AM
Hold on my friend, hold on, well done Tim...
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Date: 10/17/2018 8:07:00 AM
I guess one should always hold on to hope though at times it is the most difficult thing to do. Really nice Tim.
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Date: 10/17/2018 7:56:00 AM
- Everything is possible Tim, we just can not give up - A lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/16/2018 11:15:00 PM
penned it brilliantly // exquisite poem
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Date: 10/16/2018 10:45:00 PM
Palpable. x
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Date: 10/16/2018 9:29:00 PM
There is always Hope. Some moments seem lost, uneasy, even disturbed- these days. One must look beyond the dead end, and keep reaching for the stars. ~ Brandy
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Date: 10/16/2018 9:18:00 PM
Very well expressed, you know you you always have people to talk to here, or watch a hockey game with!
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Date: 10/16/2018 8:59:00 PM
You're a poet's poet, matey! I feel as though I have read this before. Deja vu perhaps. Great poem
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Date: 10/16/2018 8:56:00 PM
Lovely write as always, Tim. It's been a while. Whoops!!! Never lose hope, my friend.
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