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There's Nothing That I'D Rather Do

“there is nothing that i’d rather do, than spend time in a Christmas globe with you…” through the glass of a globe * * that bestows a spirit anew, * i sense the comfort of his heaven, * with ethereal divinity shining * * in his deep chestnut eyes- * for he is my crepuscular dawn, my rising of the crystalline sun * * on Christmas morn; a canvas of embracing mistletoe, * * * under doorways hung, (our favorite kiss) * * for our love story shan’t amiss * * * dulcet snowbell tunes, * glitter spreading amongst the * windy shadows, * all who gaze at the transparency * shall see what we have built- * * minutes of joy – days of hope * ~ years of ineffable love ~ * * * this year shall be our twenty-third * * Christmas spent in love- * as ruby lights gleam with excitement, * ivory envelopes Colorado pines; (for December sparkles when he is near) * * * snowflakes begin to spread like * * * wildfire in the desert, like seeds sown in the fields of winter’s * * * gust they polish our globe with resonating radiance * * * * “no, my love- * * * * there is nothing that i’d rather do… than spend time in a Christmas globe with you” * * * * * 12.9.19 * MERRY CHRISTMAS * * * * *

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Date: 12/22/2019 2:54:00 PM
Lol back again with yet another congrats my friend!;)
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Date: 12/17/2019 12:37:00 PM
- Sorry late response ... Congratulations on your winning poem, L.L. :) - Christmas is approaching ... and I wish you and your loved ones a wonderful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/14/2019 3:48:00 PM
This is such a beautiful piece that is so well written--Great job LuLoo ~ Aloha always William
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Date: 12/13/2019 4:50:00 AM
Sincere congratulations on your win in Bobby's Christmas Globe contest, Lu Loo - keep up the great work, my friend! Blessings! :o) <3
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Date: 12/12/2019 11:14:00 PM
Laura I should have known this beauty would place do high in a great win!;) congratulations!;)
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Date: 12/12/2019 9:59:00 PM
Love the imagery of snowflakes and : snowflakes begin to spread like wildfire in the desert. Congratulations, Luloo!
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Date: 12/12/2019 6:57:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Lu Loo
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Date: 12/9/2019 2:49:00 PM
How delightful! Beautifully penned and executed, Lu Loo.
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Date: 12/10/2019 1:45:00 PM
thank you! Hope all is well :) -luloo
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/10/2019 1:45:00 PM
thank you! Hope all is well :) -luloo

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