There's a Whole In My Bucket

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An example for my wordplay contest.

There's a whole in my bucket

There is a hole in my bucket, and I can't use it.
It's not the whole bucket that has a hole otherwise it would not exist.

If there were many holes in the bucket, you could say it was a holey bucket
but that would not make it a holy bucket.
 
That would only be used for a special purpose like worship. 
But who really needs a holy bucket anyways? 
Who needs a holey bucket? No one! 

A whole bucket of water would be good, 
but obviously if there was a lot of holes that would not make it holey water as the water would leak out, it would not be holy water either as it would be dirty as it fell to the ground.
 
See the problem?


John Derek Hamilton
March 15,2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/20/2016 2:52:00 PM
Point well taken!
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/6/2016 10:11:00 AM
Thanks Sarita
Date: 3/16/2016 10:48:00 AM
John, this is hard to compete with! I love it and love the contest. Very creative..:)-luloo
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/6/2016 10:12:00 AM
Thanks Laura
Date: 3/15/2016 4:50:00 PM
lolol. Nice homophone...I have one thing to say.."Well fix it dear Henry, dear Henry fix it." you can call me Liza..
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/6/2016 10:13:00 AM
Thanks Shaunda
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