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There's a Place For Us

"there's a place for us"
one fine day words were written "there's a place for us"
on this fine day such words stand true and the test of time
spending memorable moments with you will always be right
my hand you take and I follow to where love leads us both
drawn by force we stand together under heaven and light
SkyWatcher  04-24-17

Copyright © Lisa Ricci | Year Posted 2017

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Darlene De Beaulieu

May 25, 2017 at 2:08 PM

Hello Sky Watcher,I have enjoyed your poem.I have also wrote your poem word to word in my own poetry book where I keep the poems that I can reread when I go somewhere to just read these poetry again and again to feel like I am there with my imaginary boyfriend.

May 26, 2017 at 4:33 AM

Good Morning Darlene. Thank you very much. I am very honored by your words and generous review. Words can not express. Have a wonderful morning and weekend.

April 29, 2017 at 5:42 AM

Seven for a taste of heaven (You and Demetrios Trifiatis) do the taste of heaven well. Shalom and amen

April 30, 2017 at 2:47 AM

Good Morning Anil. And yes, Shalom back to you. Honestly. Thank you for this lovely and generous review. Hope all is well. Enjoy the morning and day. I will see you on your page.

April 27, 2017 at 5:16 PM

Lovely poem for someone special. Love the title too! Regards, Craig

April 29, 2017 at 6:05 AM

Good Morning Craig. I'm so sorry for the late response. I don't know what happened. The review never appeared. I thank you very much for such generosity. Thank you also for mentioning the title. I enjoy titles as well. Have a wonderful morning. I will see you soon on your page.

April 27, 2017 at 10:38 AM

Soft and sweet flowing write Lisa, thanks for sharing it with us...

April 29, 2017 at 6:07 AM

Morning Charlie. I'm so sorry for the late response. The review never appeared. I don't know what happened. And yes, it is I who thanks you. As always you are most generous to which I do not take lightly. Have a wonderful morning and I will see you soon on your page.

April 26, 2017 at 5:21 PM

As soon as I saw the title I can't get the song from Oklahoma out of my head! Your words are so touching Lisa when you find that special person you know they are for keeps. Are you entering this in the favourite song contest? :-) hugs Jan xx

April 27, 2017 at 4:45 AM

Morning Jan. Thank you so much for your intake on the entry and the review itself. No this isn't for the contest. Just an entry. By the way, speaking of the contest you have chosen and wrote of a most wonderful and beautiful song. It was so hard to choose for they all have marvelous meaning. Thank you again. Have a wonderful morning.

April 26, 2017 at 3:40 AM

Refreshing and sweet Lisa, written to change the state of ones mind, and smile, A 7++

April 26, 2017 at 3:36 PM

Good Evening Maria. I like your thinking. Anything that changes a state of mind (for the better that is) is a plus in my opinion. Thank you very much. Have a wonderful night. I will see you soon.

Connie Marcum Wong

April 25, 2017 at 6:59 PM

This is a beautiful, lyrical romantic piece Lisa. Carried me right into a daydream! 7 ; )

April 26, 2017 at 3:34 PM

Oh wow. Good Evening Connie. I'm sorry about the late response. Thank you so much. I very much enjoyed your generous commentary. Thank you. Have a wonderful night.

April 25, 2017 at 2:49 PM

"there's a place for us"....beautiful verse Lisa

April 26, 2017 at 3:33 PM

Good Evening Tim. I'm so sorry for the late response. Thank you very much as always. I hope you liked my little entry. Have a wonderful night.

Elizabeth Kinch

April 25, 2017 at 1:28 PM

What a beautiful poem, this has to go in my favourites and is a definite seven. So peaceful.

April 25, 2017 at 2:02 PM

Good Afternoon Elizabeth. Oh wow. I'm honored. Thank you for such a generous review and commentary. I so appreciate such graciousness. Have a wonderful night. I will see you soon on your page. May there always be peace.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

April 25, 2017 at 8:55 AM

Lisa, your words are like down feathers that lift us up, they soothe, entice, and always bring a smile in their wake:) Amitiés

April 25, 2017 at 2:00 PM

Hi Anne-Marie. Thank you Thank you. I'm pleased to think my little entry can do that. Honestly. That is a plus all the way around. Have a wonderful night and I will see you on your page. Stay well.

April 25, 2017 at 8:31 AM

Today, while I feel sad, I will read your poem over and over again. Because it brings peace in my heart.

April 25, 2017 at 1:59 PM

Hi Darren. Top of The Evening to you. My goodness Darren. That is such a wonderful and generous compliment. I'm honored and I'm glad. Honestly. Thank you Thank you. May there always be peace. Have a wonderful night.

April 25, 2017 at 7:02 AM

Love's paradise you have created ... under 'heaven and light' ... very nice ...

April 25, 2017 at 1:56 PM

Hello Probir. So nice to see you. Thank you very much. What a generous review and commentary. Have a wonderful night.

Eileen Manassian

April 24, 2017 at 9:57 PM

Lovely and soothing. Some loves are the forever kind.

April 25, 2017 at 4:58 AM

Good Morning Eileen. I agree. Thank you for such a generous and wonderful review. Never do I take them lightly. Have a wonderful morning and enjoy poetry.

April 24, 2017 at 8:09 PM

So lovely to read this today! I was just thinking, "I need my Lisa fix." Haha, wonderful words you have woven, Lisa! Enjoy your day/night, whatever the case maybe.

April 25, 2017 at 5:03 AM

My White Wolf. You have me smiling. Thank you for that is a gift as is your review and commentary. I so appreciate all your continued support and generosity. I hope you enjoyed the entry. Where would we be without love in life. Nowhere. Have a wonderful night. and I will see you on your page. Honestly thank you again White Wolf for everything.

April 24, 2017 at 5:59 PM

Lisa, this will be my last poem to read today and I couldn't have picked a better poem to end my long day with. Your poem is so beautiful and gives me an emotional lift that makes me smile and easily forget the work day. Thank you so much for being you and for sharing such beautiful words with us. Your talent is a blessing to us all.

April 25, 2017 at 4:52 AM

Morning Mr. Chris. I don't know what to say. Wow I'm very honored by your words and commentary not to mention your intake on the entry. I consider this so generous. I'm sorry if the day was tough and taxing. I also at one time held positions that the reality of life was all to real. Take one step or one case at a time. PS. May your words revert back to you and apply to you as well because they do. I will see you on your page later on.

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