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There Was Once a Man From Dunkirk

There abided an old dude in Dunkirk Who was a deacon in the parish kirk He cast his lecherous eyes On ladies' keisters and thighs He was renowned about town for this quirk Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Honorable Mention Deborah Guzzi's "There Once Was A Man From Dunkirk" Contest January 2011

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 1/23/2011 8:12:00 AM

Congrats on your HM, Bob. Well deserved. Enjoyed. Ralphie

James Fraser

Date: 1/19/2011 1:04:00 PM

What a dude, does he do lessons, hehe. Nice one Robert. Congrats on your win in Deborah's contest....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/19/2011 12:12:00 PM

Bob, I love this limerick. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/19/2011 6:17:00 AM

Congratulations Bob on your HM in Deborah Guzzi's contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2011 8:30:00 PM

Sure enjoyed this one. congratulations in the contest, Robert. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/18/2011 12:51:00 PM

Congrats Bob on your HM in the Limerick contest .. a great one... my friend.. enjoy your special honor along with me ...luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/18/2011 9:34:00 AM

Congratulations..Sara

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/18/2011 8:26:00 AM

Hi Robert - Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, KC

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/17/2011 9:42:00 AM

Very good limerick. Good luck in the contest. KC

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/16/2011 8:19:00 AM

Well I redid my entry Bob ..would u be a dear and revisit it and recomment please.. Deb is a tough TEACH..haha..thankx...

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 1/16/2011 6:42:00 AM

Robert......nice limerick on jerk /quirk. Best luck for contest. Thnx for reading my verse "India Shining" and leaving encouraging comments. Best wishes/Luv Hitendra Mehta

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/15/2011 5:25:00 PM

Good one that reads like a winners' circle for sure..Good luck...Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/15/2011 2:22:00 PM

Super one Bob and thankxxx for your heads up on my contest entry ... good luck with this neat one ... a great contest and form ..to allow us some adult fun.. haha.. enjoyed..my friend with luv..

Joe Flach

Date: 1/15/2011 2:04:00 PM

Ah yes, I'm a keister man myself. lol. Nice job Bob. Good luck in the contest. Joe

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2011 1:54:00 PM

This is cute, Robert. keisters, huh? Luv, Andrea

Linda Milgate

Date: 1/15/2011 1:43:00 PM

Funny and often true. Good luck.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/15/2011 12:52:00 PM

Looks like perfect meter now. Good work Robert. Love, Joyce

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/15/2011 11:19:00 AM

Please do another Robbie NO need to use my 1st line..it was simply an illustration of correct meter..[pious is throwing off the pattern of your meter]..please do another LOVE you!

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/15/2011 11:18:00 AM

Woo, there are a few from other places as well Bob ;) once again you brought a smile to my face with your wit.. Good luck for Deb's contest.. Hope you will have an awesome weekend ~ Wilma

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/15/2011 10:12:00 AM

I think that man was from Colorado....lol Once again you made me laugh. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/15/2011 9:59:00 AM

Very funny and witty write, Bob. Good luck in the contest,

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/15/2011 9:41:00 AM

Seems like this deacon was not as pious as he should have been, Bob. Very witty and I think the subject matter is just what Deb's looking for. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn