Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Limerick

There Was Once a Man From Dunkirk

There abided an old dude in Dunkirk

   Who was a deacon in the parish kirk

      He cast his lecherous eyes

         On ladies' keisters and thighs

            He was renowned about town for this quirk

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Honorable Mention Deborah Guzzi's "There Once Was A Man From Dunkirk" Contest
January 2011

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Ralph Taylor January 23, 2011 at 8:12 AM Congrats on your HM, Bob. Well deserved. Enjoyed. Ralphie

James Fraser January 19, 2011 at 1:04 PM What a dude, does he do lessons, hehe. Nice one Robert. Congrats on your win in Deborah's contest....:)

Carolyn Devonshire January 19, 2011 at 12:12 PM Bob, I love this limerick. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown January 19, 2011 at 6:17 AM Congratulations Bob on your HM in Deborah Guzzi's contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich January 18, 2011 at 8:30 PM Sure enjoyed this one. congratulations in the contest, Robert. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 18, 2011 at 12:51 PM Congrats Bob on your HM in the Limerick contest .. a great one... my friend.. enjoy your special honor along with me ...luv..

Sara Kendrick January 18, 2011 at 9:34 AM Congratulations..Sara

Kory Calhoun January 18, 2011 at 8:26 AM Hi Robert - Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, KC

Kory Calhoun January 17, 2011 at 9:42 AM Very good limerick. Good luck in the contest. KC

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 16, 2011 at 8:19 AM Well I redid my entry Bob ..would u be a dear and revisit it and recomment please.. Deb is a tough TEACH..haha..thankx...

Dr Hitendra Mehta January 16, 2011 at 6:42 AM Robert......nice limerick on jerk /quirk. Best luck for contest. Thnx for reading my verse "India Shining" and leaving encouraging comments. Best wishes/Luv Hitendra Mehta

Sara Kendrick January 15, 2011 at 5:25 PM Good one that reads like a winners' circle for sure..Good luck...Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 15, 2011 at 2:22 PM Super one Bob and thankxxx for your heads up on my contest entry ... good luck with this neat one ... a great contest and form ..to allow us some adult fun.. haha.. enjoyed..my friend with luv..

Joe Flach January 15, 2011 at 2:04 PM Ah yes, I'm a keister man myself. lol. Nice job Bob. Good luck in the contest. Joe

Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2011 at 1:54 PM This is cute, Robert. keisters, huh? Luv, Andrea

Linda Milgate January 15, 2011 at 1:43 PM Funny and often true. Good luck.

Joyce Johnson January 15, 2011 at 12:52 PM Looks like perfect meter now. Good work Robert. Love, Joyce

Debbie Guzzi January 15, 2011 at 11:19 AM Please do another Robbie NO need to use my 1st line..it was simply an illustration of correct meter..[pious is throwing off the pattern of your meter]..please do another LOVE you!

Wilma Neels January 15, 2011 at 11:18 AM Woo, there are a few from other places as well Bob ;) once again you brought a smile to my face with your wit.. Good luck for Deb's contest.. Hope you will have an awesome weekend ~ Wilma

Barbara Gorelick January 15, 2011 at 10:12 AM I think that man was from Colorado....lol Once again you made me laugh. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta January 15, 2011 at 9:59 AM Very funny and witty write, Bob. Good luck in the contest,

Carolyn Devonshire January 15, 2011 at 9:41 AM Seems like this deacon was not as pious as he should have been, Bob. Very witty and I think the subject matter is just what Deb's looking for. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn