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There Is a River

THERE IS A RIVER there is a river that’s flowing down to the sea and i would enter floating along peacefully down to that ocean of life that eternal depth depth knowing no measurement that ocean of life life beyond the physical at peace happily floating gone the worldly cares gone the wild will to survive there is a river that’s flowing down to the sea oh yea it has been promised

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/17/2011 9:00:00 AM
Thanks David i admire your work, please never stop writring, as it great and i do enjoy your stlye
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Date: 7/17/2011 8:51:00 AM
Tanks David i admire your work, please never stop writring
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Date: 6/19/2011 8:27:00 AM
I could lose earthly cares in this lovely picture, a beautiful write........Elizabeth
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Date: 5/6/2011 3:55:00 PM
Boats are great water conveyances, Daver, for drifting out to the "physical at peace"...as well as for keeping the mind and heart buoyant. The llama...sometimes ornery critters...I've seen them spew out some nasty lookin' stuff. I don't think anyone would want to entertain a herd of them when trying to fall asleep.:( The Llama was of no substance, but more of a convenience...bugger rhymed with drama..lol Love, Mikki
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Date: 4/11/2011 8:16:00 PM
reads like a Heavenly journey Dave on this river flowing down to the sea.. promises to cling to living life on Earth my friend.. awesome as always luv..
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Date: 4/11/2011 3:28:00 PM
wow, and you said my snow poem was peaceful!! this makes you want to just flow on down that river! Nicely done, my friend. LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/11/2011 11:30:00 AM
beautiful and meaningful metaphors you have penned in this write on life, daver
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Date: 4/11/2011 9:54:00 AM
this was a great piece of refreshing and warm poetry. thank you for reading The Pond and for your comment
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Date: 4/11/2011 7:29:00 AM
So why don't you? Nice write and imagery! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on poems. Yes, I do something extra in trees. I have written several poems about them like "The Legend of Trees", "Take the Lead", and more. Thanks again. Have a good one! Love and blessings, Caroline.
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