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There Is a Comfort To the Sadness

There is a comfort to the Sadness There is a comfort to the sadness, not that it was comforting, more a realization of necessity. Oh, there were tears, stories, followed by laughter and melancholy. A room full of emptiness, mementos, a roaring silence. I walk alone now, no shadow leads the way, no head turns to hasten my steps, waits impatiently. We had agreed - one more summer if he was up to it. His days grew shorter as did Summer’s. It was his time. I honored his life by allowing him a quiet death. His pain draining into me. He will always be there up ahead, waiting impatiently for there is a comfort to the sadness. ©3/4/2018 submitted to – Free Verse on Sadness (again) – Poetry Contest sponsor – Laura Loo

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Date: 3/7/2018 7:54:00 PM
enjoyed reading , John, congratulations , on your win..hugs eve
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Date: 3/5/2018 8:29:00 AM
Love this John! Love the contradictions ... a room full of emptiness ... a roaring silence! I honored his life by allowing him a quiet death!!! Such great lines. Congratulations on a well deserved win!! ~ Judy
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John Lawless
Date: 3/5/2018 3:25:00 PM
Thank you Judith, I have always found sadness to be a double edged sword
Date: 3/5/2018 5:49:00 AM
wow, this gave me chills down my arms, so sadly beautiful...thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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John Lawless
Date: 3/5/2018 3:23:00 PM
Thanks Laura, for the high placement and for the stimulation of the muse.

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