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There Is a Comfort To the Sadness

There is a comfort to the Sadness

There is a comfort
to the sadness,
not that it was
comforting,
more a realization
of necessity.
Oh, there were tears,
stories, followed by
laughter and melancholy.
A room full of emptiness,
mementos, a roaring silence.

I walk alone now,
no shadow leads
the way, no head
turns to hasten
my steps, waits
impatiently.

We had agreed -
one more summer
if he was up to it.
His days grew shorter
as did Summer’s.
It was his time.
I honored his life
by allowing him
a quiet death.
His pain draining
into me.

He will always be there
up ahead, waiting impatiently
for there is a comfort
to the sadness.


©3/4/2018

submitted to – Free Verse on Sadness (again) – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Laura Loo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/7/2018 7:54:00 PM
enjoyed reading , John, congratulations , on your win..hugs eve
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Date: 3/5/2018 8:29:00 AM
Love this John! Love the contradictions ... a room full of emptiness ... a roaring silence! I honored his life by allowing him a quiet death!!! Such great lines. Congratulations on a well deserved win!! ~ Judy
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John Lawless
Date: 3/5/2018 3:25:00 PM
Thank you Judith, I have always found sadness to be a double edged sword
Date: 3/5/2018 5:49:00 AM
wow, this gave me chills down my arms, so sadly beautiful...thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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John Lawless
Date: 3/5/2018 3:23:00 PM
Thanks Laura, for the high placement and for the stimulation of the muse.

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