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”When thoughts cease to flow ~ Where does ego go” When I declare about myself, I’m trying to convince myself, But when I silence all such thoughts, I often then reveal myself. The muse and I, one and the same; The muse, though, does not take my name, And neither does seek fortune, fame, Nor point to others, laying blame. And this is why I cannot write When I am present in my sight; At times like these, my muse takes flight, Returning in a dimmer light. Elusive, creativity: Unleash the mind and set it free; I wanders off and leaves just me, And to my joy, epiphany. ————— First Place Winner For the Bubble of Illusion Poetry Contest Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker Written on 05/16/2022

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Date: 5/21/2022 2:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/21/2022 7:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. Love the line "Unleash the mind and set it free." Yes, set it free. Have a great/blessed weekend.......................
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Date: 5/20/2022 8:01:00 PM
I wanders off and leaves just me, And to my joy, epiphany” ~ another level! Congrats on your win, Jeff
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 5/21/2022 4:37:00 AM
Thanks, that was an interesting topic to contemplate! Appreciate you doing the contest!
Date: 5/19/2022 12:51:00 PM
This made me smile "The muse and I, one and the same; The muse, though, does not take my name," Because my muse has a name and she gets angry if I do not use it!
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Date: 5/17/2022 7:55:00 PM
So much for expecting 'Selfies' from you, friend! lol. Seriously, less of you is more. (No offense there, I hope: The same is true of 'me.'). :) gw
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Date: 5/17/2022 2:24:00 PM
Isn't it just great when it all comes together! I bet your poem is the winner. Best of luck 1
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Date: 5/17/2022 1:14:00 PM
Such a fine writing Jeff, really cool rhyme and flow along with nice imagery too. Keep penning your muse! Blessings, Gordon
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 5/17/2022 3:04:00 PM
Thats very kind of you Gordon, thanks!

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