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There Are Days When

The unsure path is steep and rough, I’m so tired My legs refuse to walk any farther without prop On a futile journey becoming with time so hard There are days when I think it’s time now to stop. The journey started long ago, I need to complete The stormy wind lashes me all the time blowing A wreck, I’ve my destiny behind dark cloud to meet There are days when I think sky won’t stop falling. The twilight hours arrived in the horizon too early I’ve seen opaque night on me so quickly descend Dreadful dreams of failed life constantly haunt me There are days when I think this night won’t end. You came flying like latticed butterfly in spectral dawn But in summer when my blooming garden turned fawn You drifted away leaving me to bear the pain forlorn There are days when I think you haven’t yet gone. To give a new meaning to my life that I shall retain There are days when I think you’ll come to me again.
August 19, 2018

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Date: 6/10/2021 10:07:00 PM
A poignant piece of poetry very well penned, and a deserving win, congrats
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Date: 6/9/2021 4:02:00 AM
Creative winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 6/8/2021 4:46:00 PM
Subimal, congrats on your win in Brian's contest ! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 9/2/2018 4:16:00 PM
many congrats on your win Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/4/2018 12:05:00 AM
Thank you, Jan.
Date: 9/2/2018 12:18:00 PM
Congrats on your placement, Subimal, and thanks for gracing my contest with your entry. regards, Viv
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/4/2018 12:04:00 AM
Thank you, Viv for the placement.
Date: 8/20/2018 2:46:00 PM
Hello Subimal Sinha-Roy, We everything goes right, We also have those days when things don't go right. Or a bit of both. Have a nice day my friend.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/23/2018 2:28:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene.
Date: 8/19/2018 11:24:00 PM
Such an emotive write that encompasses pain and loneliness to be sure, but it’s also kissed with a sweet hope of a coming better day!!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/19/2018 11:51:00 PM
Thank you, LM.
Date: 8/19/2018 5:06:00 AM
Someone better will come soaring in Subimal. You deserve someone special! Hugs, Connie : ) xxoo
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/19/2018 11:50:00 PM
Thank you, Connie for your visit.

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