Then He Was Gone

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life reduced to a box of dust and memories in a flash there then gone the light extinguished AP: 2nd place 2021 Submitted on August 14, 2021 for A BRIAN STRAND 1,2,3,4 OR 5 LINE POETRY contest sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST and October 29, 2020 for contest IN JUST A FEW WORDS sponsored by JOSEPH MAY

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/16/2021 11:01:00 PM

Life is reduced to a box in the end, nothing more, great write, Line, congratulations:)

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/17/2021 3:47:00 AM

Thank you very much, Jo ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2021 2:46:00 PM

I like Susan's description for this poem, Line. She really got it right how she describes this poem. Congrats in the contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/16/2021 8:55:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea ~

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/30/2020 5:53:00 PM

Oh, such sad mournful imagery, Line. The fleeting fragility of life is eloquently expressed. Your poetic pen spills with woe. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/30/2020 7:53:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Susan.