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Then and Now-Cheese and Whine

Oh, I love your raven lustrous silky hair He used to say, touching it with such care Now—strands clog the bath vanity Why don’t you donate it for charity? I give him my deepest pulverizing stare Written on:08/02/2016 Contest:'Cheese and Whine' by Phillip Garcia

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Date: 8/3/2016 9:25:00 AM
This is such a great Limerick, Sara. I love the contrast of then and now. Best wishes for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/3/2016 10:24:00 AM
Thanks a lot Sandra!
Date: 8/2/2016 12:31:00 PM
- A winning poems with great humor Sara, good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/3/2016 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Sunshine:)

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