their time is now

faces as old and wrinkled as their clothing
a metered gait adjusted to combined needs
gnarled hands held, as always, in support
the sun welcomes their warm-faced smiles

sounds of children in the distance amuse them
an old dog sidles up in search of a pat
the old park bench waits patiently
there is no hurry – their time - is now
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Wolf Avatar
June 2, 2024 at 7:42 PM
''Their time is now!" Love the satirical irony in those four words, John. The truth hurts...
Willason Avatar
June 1, 2024 at 4:07 AM
A sensitive and moving poem John...gets inside the head. Your powers of observation and reflection shine through....steered to a lovely ending.
Greenhough Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 8:16 PM
It is true. Retirement years can be comfortable.i like this verse.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 10:11 AM
I enjoyed reading your write with a wonderful ending. Life/age go together... Have A Blessed Day/Weekend Writing Away.........
M  Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 7:24 AM
Awww John……that is just lovely! I really felt this one! Debx
Lane Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 6:36 AM
As a person of mature age, not qualifying that to include the mind, I appreciate your thoughts, John. Time takes its toll no matter if we hurry or slow our life's pace down to a crawl. As long as I can think, my time is now.
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