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Your bodily and spiritual selves are one. Anything you wish has a piece of you as one. The cities and places you've been to for fun. Books you revert to again and again. Your little victories in everyday spun. Your conduct reflects your pain outrun. Your structure is a framework you have begun. Plants and flowers that appeal to a loved one What do you prefer to watch and listen for, boon? Your personal universe of possessions soon.

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Date: 8/15/2021 6:22:00 AM
Nicely done in monorhymes, Lasaad.
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Date: 8/15/2021 8:56:00 AM
Appreciate your kind words, blessings and hugs
Date: 8/15/2021 1:32:00 AM
Your spirit is so elegant and virtuous that it shines in your body.
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Date: 8/15/2021 8:53:00 AM
Appreciate your very kind words, your kindness is shining in every world, Victor. My deepest regards
Date: 8/14/2021 5:27:00 PM
Yes indeed, body and spirit are united...Delice
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Date: 8/14/2021 8:13:00 PM
You're correct; Delice, a body without his spirit, could be dead. Thanks for your thoughtful comment

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