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The Wreck

Twisting, spinning, upside down Scraping, sliding sideways, air bags deployed Blackness, calm, conscious, seat belt bound visions flashing through his brain Does not know who, someone has bled Dash lights blurry, silence "Megan, Megan!" "Oh, my God, my daughter" “Forceps..Clamp...watch the heart beat.” “Doctor we’re losing him, No, he’s back” “Dad, you’re hurt!!!” “Hush sweet, I have to hurry Your seat belt jammed, My knife, I’ll cut it, you crawl away. Call help on the Cell phone.... Must lie down” “I don’t like those spikes, more oxygen, mo...” “It’s no use doctor”, as the line went flat. “I know. I must tell my wife her father died”. Jul 03 2010 For Joe’s “poem that does not rhyme” contest

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Date: 1/11/2013 5:07:00 PM
That write was a ride in itself! Light & Love
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Date: 3/26/2011 10:25:00 PM
congrats on this superb poem of yours making it into the final round,Charles.
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Date: 3/9/2011 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Charles. Love Carol
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Date: 3/7/2011 3:45:00 PM
So poerful no wonder it's a winner and on to round two! Go Charles! Light & Love
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Date: 3/6/2011 6:31:00 PM
Congrats Charles on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv..
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Charles. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/13/2011 9:05:00 PM
Congrats Charles on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. nice one to share with us all..with luv..
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Date: 2/13/2011 9:03:00 PM
Congrats Charlotte on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all with luv...
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Date: 7/8/2010 7:08:00 AM
Charles, a very intriguing and thrilling entry. I was glad to read your story behind the story in your blog. I got chills down my spine each and every time a read this tale. Joe
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Date: 7/8/2010 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in Joe Flach's contest "A Poem That Doesn't Rhyme". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/7/2010 6:42:00 PM
Just read your blog, Charles, and I'm so glad this didn't happen to you. Frighteningly realistic poem. Good work, my friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/7/2010 2:55:00 PM
wow, this is amazing, so sad yet so well written, just wonderful... Love Constance
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Date: 7/7/2010 2:15:00 PM
A good one Charles. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/7/2010 12:49:00 PM
Oh wow, Charles....I hope this isn't true...but I'm afraid that it is too real...too filled with emotion, it speaks of a real event that you have captured in this terrible moment? An amazing, yet...terribly sad poem. So well written. ~ Carrie
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Date: 7/7/2010 11:12:00 AM
Like the conversation style of this one. The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on your win in Joe's contest. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Karen
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Date: 7/7/2010 10:29:00 AM
Very good depiction of something happening in the moment, Charles. Very sad too. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/7/2010 9:44:00 AM
How sad but a great entry and win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/5/2010 6:27:00 AM
A nice entry to the contest. Good luck
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Date: 7/4/2010 7:39:00 AM
A wonderful entry to the contest. Good luck
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