The Wreck

Twisting, spinning, upside down
Scraping, sliding sideways, air bags deployed 
Blackness, calm, conscious, seat belt bound
visions flashing through his brain
Does not know who, someone has bled
Dash lights blurry, silence
"Megan, Megan!"
"Oh, my God, my daughter"

“Forceps..Clamp...watch the heart beat.”
“Doctor we’re losing him, No, he’s back”

“Dad, you’re hurt!!!”
“Hush sweet, I have to hurry
Your seat belt jammed,
My knife, I’ll cut it, you crawl away.
Call help on the Cell phone....
Must lie down”

“I don’t like those spikes, more oxygen, mo...”
“It’s no use doctor”, as the line went flat.
“I know.  I must tell my wife her father died”.

Jul 03 2010 For Joe’s “poem that does not rhyme” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 5:07 PM
That write was a ride in itself! Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2011 at 10:25 PM
congrats on this superb poem of yours making it into the final round,Charles.
Brown Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 10:54 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Charles. Love Carol
Guzzi Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 3:45 PM
So poerful no wonder it's a winner and on to round two! Go Charles! Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 6:31 PM
Congrats Charles on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv..
Brown Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 12:54 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Charles. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
February 13, 2011 at 9:05 PM
Congrats Charles on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. nice one to share with us all..with luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
February 13, 2011 at 9:03 PM
Congrats Charlotte on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all with luv...
Flach Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 7:08 AM
Charles, a very intriguing and thrilling entry. I was glad to read your story behind the story in your blog. I got chills down my spine each and every time a read this tale. Joe
Brown Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 6:56 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in Joe Flach's contest "A Poem That Doesn't Rhyme". Love, Carol
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July 7, 2010 at 6:42 PM
Just read your blog, Charles, and I'm so glad this didn't happen to you. Frighteningly realistic poem. Good work, my friend! Love, Carolyn
La France Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 2:55 PM
wow, this is amazing, so sad yet so well written, just wonderful... Love Constance
Freeman Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 2:15 PM
A good one Charles. Agape, Moses
Richards Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 12:49 PM
Oh wow, Charles....I hope this isn't true...but I'm afraid that it is too real...too filled with emotion, it speaks of a real event that you have captured in this terrible moment? An amazing, yet...terribly sad poem. So well written. ~ Carrie
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July 7, 2010 at 11:12 AM
Like the conversation style of this one. The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on your win in Joe's contest. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Karen
Dietrich Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 10:29 AM
Very good depiction of something happening in the moment, Charles. Very sad too. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
Johnson Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 9:44 AM
How sad but a great entry and win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 6:27 AM
A nice entry to the contest. Good luck
Mehta Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 7:39 AM
A wonderful entry to the contest. Good luck
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