The Woods

The woods so dense,
So dark, so eerie.
Tree trunks thicker,
Than I remember.
 
Dampness hugs my throat, 
And whispers cannot be heard.
But the rustling sound of branches,
I'll always recall,
The dreary dense woods,
I'll always remember.
 
The shadowy figures pop in and out,
From behind tree trunks and limbs,
I remember sliver-like images,
They wait and watch,
While dusk looms around me.
 
Friend or foe I do not know,
Who is watching and who is hiding?
When dawn starts to trickle in above,
And darts through the tree trunks that surround me.
I will escape outside these woods,
To a safer place where I can be heard.
 
The woods so deep
So dark, so eerie.
Will I last till dawn?
Or will the shadows devour me?
 
 
©2015 by Lee Christine Brownlee
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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George   Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 10:11 AM
You have created an eerie tone here, Lee. Thank you. I enjoyed very much.
Breidenthal Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 4:31 AM
So mysterious and awesome this poem is!
Brownlee Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 11:45 AM
Thank you so much. It is funny, a book of my poetry is being published right now and I don't think I put that poem in it. Oops!
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