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I zip up my jacket, pulling my beanie cap over my ears. The brisk November morn greets me as I turn north, approaching the wooded area near my home. A wintry wind sweeps across the land with a bold honesty, a rawness that brought my soul into the gentle cloud-filtered rays. The woods crowned the land with protective grace, an ever-evolving map, its strong roots holding the earth firm in all kind of weather. In this nature’s hug of ever open arms of brown, cozy beneath the canopy of trees, there is a welcoming spirit that calls. It is as if there is something in me the trees can feel and they chatter to it, my intuition perhaps. There is a softness to the woodland floor, to the moss that supports and springs back. The woodland is the birdsong, it is the playful light and the serenity of time that flows without the clocks of man.
woods may be silent but I sense the hidden stares telling me they’re there

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Date: 11/13/2023 12:55:00 AM
There is excellence in your prose and poetry. I wonder how your book is progressing, Blessings.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/13/2023 4:38:00 AM
thanks for stopping by, Victor, and for your kind words. Thanks for asking about my book..are you asking about my novel or collection of memoirs? Both are reaching their final stages of my editing...then an outside editor...then publishing. It's a long road :-) I appreciate your curiosity. Have a blessed day,Sara
Date: 11/12/2023 11:03:00 PM
the serenity of time that flows without the clocks of man. remarkably said, dear sara, i love walking trhough forests, and sometims be afraid with silence or noises, thanks for the beautiful poem
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Date: 11/13/2023 4:39:00 AM
thanks for your visit, Yann! I'm grateful to know another walker who loves forests, etc. They fascinate me. May you have a splendid day, Sara
Date: 11/12/2023 5:51:00 PM
Dear Sara. I now realize that the deep earth is more diversified than the surface ecosystem. Many creatures, both large and small, watch our actions from their hidden habitat. As I explored this buried world through your wonderful haibun, I felt entirely linked to nature. This intense awareness aided me to grasp untold stories spoken in the pristine silence of this exquisite poem.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/13/2023 4:41:00 AM
wow, dear Sotto, I'm so grateful for your words and for your taking the time to see my words beyond the surface. I'm delighted my poem ignited an awareness of those 'untold stories.' I appreciate your depth and the profound nature of your characters. Have an enjoyable day! your poetess friend, Sara
Date: 11/12/2023 3:27:00 PM
Yes, animals and insects are hidden away and are watching what we humans are doing in their domain. Thank you for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/12/2023 4:43:00 PM
I appreciate your perspective. Thanks for your visit and enjoy the upcoming week, Sara B
Date: 11/12/2023 12:52:00 PM
I love this, especially the last stanza! I am faving this!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/12/2023 1:05:00 PM
thanks for the visit and for faving my poem. I'm most grateful. Have a pleasant Sunday, Sara
Date: 11/12/2023 10:55:00 AM
Very moving. I felt I was next ti you in the woods. Man and nature can be very close, indeed. I am glad you appreciate thatL. You are a phenomenal poetess. Pangie xx
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/12/2023 1:06:00 PM
Pangie--I'm so grateful for your support and visits to my site. I agree, man & nature are very close, but many folks don't see that....kind of sad to me. Thanks for your complimentary words. You're so sweet. Enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 11/12/2023 9:12:00 AM
“ The woodland is the birdsong, it is the playful light and the serenity of time that flows without the clocks of man.” ah i love that! How serene is this haibun! I just love the way you’ve painted imagery throughout this gorgeous write. I felt like i was walking through this place on a brisk november morning, embracing natures arms in brown, and yes that is a very deep level of mindfulness to be able to grasp the tales told in silence, theres a story yes …. If we listen. Ah another fave for me
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Date: 11/12/2023 1:10:00 PM
dearest kind Ink--Thank you for finding my Haibun serene and for appreciating the imagery. I'm so grateful you felt like you were out walking with me on a brisk morn. I was hoping to create that sensation. When I'm having a hectic day, I visit the woods and am immediately calm, able to approach stress in a mindful way. Thank you for faving this piece. I appreciate your enthusiastic support...means a great deal to me. Have a splendid Sunday evening, Sara

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