The Wooden Cradle

"The Wooden Cradle" a white wooden empty cradle, I wait in the nursery room for the smell of baby fragrance to illuminate sleeping bloom years have escalated, still sounds of silence hurt my ears for all I hear are tender sobs from a Mother's broken tears. I felt a distant heartbeat once, but it has ceased to linger my warmth caressed a dying soul who touched my slats with finger his breath was labored; his life short, but I held his heart close now haunting memories exist as I cuddle his sweet ghost. my frame sits in a sunny place, outside, I see a tree swaying in the balmy breeze where a swing should be instead, I cry, so silently, recall a tiny form I embraced in a moment in time and kept him safe and warm. if these walls within this room could whisper words of sorrow sheer pain would cause tremendous tears to fashion sad tomorrows I sympathize with woeful walls whose treasure no longer looms but no-one understands my loss inside the nursery room. *For Frank H.'s PERSONIFICATION Contest.
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March 13, 2014 at 2:36 AM
a lovely sunny image~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~
Lamoureux Avatar
December 17, 2012 at 8:01 PM
Excellent Win! Congratulations.
Gildersleeve Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 4:03 AM
Congratulation on your win Linda. A beautiful poem. Warm wishes, Connie
Johnson Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 6:33 PM
I know this is a trues story but from the cradles point of view. Very touching Linda. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 11:44 AM
Congratulations on your win Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
Liwayway Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 7:48 AM
excellent write...congratulations on your win friend Linda-Marie...i like it!!! hugs, Maria
Williams Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 2:51 AM
Linda-Marie big congrats on your win, just excellent...David
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 12:38 AM
Congratulations n your no 1 spot Linda xx
Sweetheart Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 12:09 AM
WON 1ST PLACE .. THANKXX.
Cavanaugh Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 10:36 PM
Great write. Congratulations on a well deserved win.
Roberts Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 9:53 PM
Wow Linda so sad but so beautifully written. Congratulations
Gasun Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 9:06 PM
Great write my dear Linda-M! Many congratulations on your well-deserved super win! love and big hugs, Leonora
Richards Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 6:47 PM
So heartfelt and sad. Congratulations on a worth 1st place poem!!
Ober Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 6:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful. Your words gave me goosebumps. Congratulations on your very well-deserved win!
Irwin Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 5:37 PM
Wow. Heartbreaking and beautiful.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 9:16 PM
You have touched my heart with your poem, Linda-Marie. The image of your empty cradle is haunting. Congrats on another well deserved win!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 4:24 AM
Wow Linda.....such a poignant and moving poem. It was really beautiful. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. I would have had to make this number one!
Brown Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 12:10 PM
Congratulations on your win Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 3:23 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Ramage Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 2:48 PM
absolutely heartbreaking. so touching. thank you for sharing this with us. congrats on your win but truly beautiful. thank you lee
Macfarlane Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 12:20 PM
So touching and sad Linda-Marie, so sorry for what you have endured. Remarkable write! I'm honored to share this #2 spot with you. Hugs
Johnson Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 9:19 AM
lAn empty cradle. A sad picture yolu have drawn from your own sad past experience. Congratulations on your win Linda Marie.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 7:45 AM
WON 2ND PLACE ... THANKXXX
Liwayway Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 5:57 AM
congrats on your win friend Linda-Marie. cheers!!
Dietrich Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 9:06 PM
wow, Linda, a great win on a great poem. I knew it would do well. Congratulations.
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