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THE WONDER OF YOU

Beautifully tender and kindness untold
Awesome in splendor with courage bold 
Your love overtakes me.. it's without end
Sweet girl, to be your one and only..
Amazed in your wonder again

Patiently waiting while I travel life's shores
Faithfully praying through spiritual wars
Such love leaves me overwhelmed within
Sweet girl, I'm speechless and grateful
Amazed in your wonder again

Mesmerizing gal.. my most intimate friend
I promise to be your lover to the end
You're my heaven sent soulmate, and more
You bring me back from distant shores
You're my everything, and then...
Amazed in your wonder again
I love you
I love the wonder of you
I love you
Amazed in your wonder again
I love you

~Lyric Man

Note: This write is to the girl of my dreams. She was way beyond me, but God kept her confused until she was legally mine :) This write is part of my mini-series giving a backstage view of how my life has shaped my writing. 

PS.. My wife is now a super shy gal about our private life so it was a coup getting permission to post one of my songs to her. Not my fav but it's something.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/31/2018 12:54:00 PM
Sweet!
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Date: 7/26/2018 11:02:00 PM
A wholehearted poem…marvelously composed, Lyric Man.
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Date: 7/26/2018 6:52:00 AM
Spectacularly divine - love it!!
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Date: 7/25/2018 6:10:00 PM
beautiful words of love for your wife she may be super shy but I'm sure she feels super lucky too
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Date: 7/22/2018 1:05:00 AM
I love the note "God kept her confused until she was legally mine" lol I love the poem too.
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Date: 7/19/2018 7:59:00 PM
Well-done, Lyric Man--romantic and exuberant! Janice
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Date: 7/18/2018 9:08:00 AM
The poem flows with a pleasant beat and the words say everything by evoking thoughts within the reader's consciousness. I am captivated by these images and the passion of the words inflame my heart. Emile.
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Date: 7/18/2018 1:09:00 AM
Beautiful, every word speaks of love, you have a wonderful gift. Keep writing my friend. I love your poems.
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Date: 7/17/2018 8:51:00 PM
Such a beautiful and romantic song of love. More so because it feels like it's from the heart, not just words. :)
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Date: 7/17/2018 6:25:00 AM
Wonderful.write! I loved it Hugs Brenda
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Date: 7/16/2018 9:13:00 AM
Oh, you are definitely a man in love! This sweet, romantic declaration of love sings it all! Wishing you more love! Pandita
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Date: 7/16/2018 8:13:00 AM
This is quite beautifully expressed.
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Date: 7/15/2018 7:58:00 PM
Passion is to your poetry as roots to flowers.
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Date: 7/15/2018 3:20:00 PM
This is very nice, the title reminded everybody to a different artist. The only song I remember with this title was Dean Martin's song.
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Date: 7/15/2018 11:29:00 AM
This is stunningly heartfelt and beautiful.
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Date: 7/15/2018 7:40:00 AM
Aw, she’s lucky to have you too! Such a sweet write; it’s so obviously written from the heart :-)
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Date: 7/15/2018 2:09:00 AM
Reminds me of "Baby I'm Amazed" by Paul McCartney. Thank you for sharing LM:)
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Date: 7/14/2018 7:19:00 PM
She is very lucky to have you. This is so beautiful and romantic. Even though it isn't your favorite, it is words from the depth of your heart, which makes it truly amazing. Perfect in every way. ~ Brandy
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