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The Wonder of You

Beautifully tender and kindness untold Awesome in splendor with courage bold Your love overtakes me.. it's without end Sweet girl, to be your one and only.. Amazed in your wonder again Patiently waiting while I travel life's shores Faithfully praying through spiritual wars Such love leaves me overwhelmed within Sweet girl, I'm speechless and grateful Amazed in your wonder again Mesmerizing gal.. my most intimate friend I promise to be your lover to the end You're my heaven sent soulmate, and more You bring me back from distant shores You're my everything, and then... Amazed in your wonder again I love you I love the wonder of you I love you Amazed in your wonder again I love you ~Lyric Man Note: This write is to the girl of my dreams. She was way beyond me, but God kept her confused until she was legally mine :) This write is part of my mini-series giving a backstage view of how my life has shaped my writing. PS.. My wife is now a super shy gal about our private life so it was a coup getting permission to post one of my songs to her. Not my fav but it's something.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/31/2018 12:54:00 PM

Sweet!

Irfanulla Shariff

Date: 7/26/2018 11:02:00 PM

A wholehearted poem…marvelously composed, Lyric Man.

Kumkazi Mhlongo

Date: 7/26/2018 6:52:00 AM

Spectacularly divine - love it!!

Alesia Leach

Date: 7/25/2018 6:10:00 PM

beautiful words of love for your wife she may be super shy but I'm sure she feels super lucky too

Becca Teagan

Date: 7/22/2018 1:05:00 AM

I love the note "God kept her confused until she was legally mine" lol I love the poem too.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/19/2018 7:59:00 PM

Well-done, Lyric Man--romantic and exuberant! Janice

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/18/2018 9:08:00 AM

The poem flows with a pleasant beat and the words say everything by evoking thoughts within the reader's consciousness. I am captivated by these images and the passion of the words inflame my heart. Emile.

Maria Feliciano

Date: 7/18/2018 1:09:00 AM

Beautiful, every word speaks of love, you have a wonderful gift. Keep writing my friend. I love your poems.

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/17/2018 8:51:00 PM

Such a beautiful and romantic song of love. More so because it feels like it's from the heart, not just words. :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/16/2018 9:13:00 AM

Oh, you are definitely a man in love! This sweet, romantic declaration of love sings it all! Wishing you more love! Pandita

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/16/2018 8:13:00 AM

This is quite beautifully expressed.

Gerald Dillenbeck

Date: 7/15/2018 7:58:00 PM

Passion is to your poetry as roots to flowers.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/15/2018 3:20:00 PM

This is very nice, the title reminded everybody to a different artist. The only song I remember with this title was Dean Martin's song.

Kale Brereton

Date: 7/15/2018 11:29:00 AM

This is stunningly heartfelt and beautiful.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/15/2018 2:09:00 AM

Reminds me of "Baby I'm Amazed" by Paul McCartney. Thank you for sharing LM:)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/14/2018 7:19:00 PM

She is very lucky to have you. This is so beautiful and romantic. Even though it isn't your favorite, it is words from the depth of your heart, which makes it truly amazing. Perfect in every way. ~ Brandy