The Woman Who Passed Me

(after Charles Baudelaire)

Around me hurled and roared Place Madeleine: 
and you were tall and svelte, in funeral dress, 
majestic in your grief. One deft caress 
set your hem dancing. And I knew it then. 

Such elegance! Those legs, so statue-like! 
I drank you, like a furious alcoholic: 
that brow of yours, where tempests breed and frolic! 
The sweetness which enchants, before it strikes! 

A lightning flash ... then night. Elusive beauty 
who, with one look, gave me my life anew, 
will we not meet again in all eternity? 

Elsewhere? Far off? Too late? Let's face it, never. 
I lost you in the crowd. The thread was severed. 
I really could have loved you. And you knew.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Wolf Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 7:38 AM
You are a talent yet to be discovered, my friend! I have now read a few of your works and am greatly impressed! "Love Hertz" for one. Haha. Darren White mentioned you to me so I searched for you! And am glad I did!
Coy Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 7:51 AM
I am deeply flattered and grateful. Thank you! I'll be taking a look at your gems, very soon!
White Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 1:45 PM
À une passante. You used the same enclosed rhyme. The translation is exquisite. "Moi, je buvais, crispé comme un extravagant". Your translation is just YUMM :D Oh how you translated wonderfully, Oh, how you knew I'd like it ;)
Coy Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 2:00 PM
LOL I had a pretty good idea. One thing I think we agree on: literal translation is not always the best way to render a poem. Some imagination can make the finished product more truthful.
Ra Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 11:34 AM
beautiful poem, bravo!!!
Coy Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Sofia, that's a lovely thing to say. Thank you so much!
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