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The Woman Who Passed Me

(after Charles Baudelaire) Around me hurled and roared Place Madeleine: and you were tall and svelte, in funeral dress, majestic in your grief. One deft caress set your hem dancing. And I knew it then. Such elegance! Those legs, so statue-like! I drank you, like a furious alcoholic: that brow of yours, where tempests breed and frolic! The sweetness which enchants, before it strikes! A lightning flash ... then night. Elusive beauty who, with one look, gave me my life anew, will we not meet again in all eternity? Elsewhere? Far off? Too late? Let's face it, never. I lost you in the crowd. The thread was severed. I really could have loved you. And you knew.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/25/2017 7:38:00 AM
You are a talent yet to be discovered, my friend! I have now read a few of your works and am greatly impressed! "Love Hertz" for one. Haha. Darren White mentioned you to me so I searched for you! And am glad I did!
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Michael Coy
Date: 3/25/2017 7:51:00 AM
I am deeply flattered and grateful. Thank you! I'll be taking a look at your gems, very soon!
Date: 3/21/2017 1:45:00 PM
À une passante. You used the same enclosed rhyme. The translation is exquisite. "Moi, je buvais, crispé comme un extravagant". Your translation is just YUMM :D Oh how you translated wonderfully, Oh, how you knew I'd like it ;)
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Michael Coy
Date: 3/21/2017 2:00:00 PM
LOL I had a pretty good idea. One thing I think we agree on: literal translation is not always the best way to render a poem. Some imagination can make the finished product more truthful.
Date: 3/21/2017 11:34:00 AM
beautiful poem, bravo!!!
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Michael Coy
Date: 3/21/2017 12:09:00 PM
Sofia, that's a lovely thing to say. Thank you so much!

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