The Woman In the Flower

In the flower, a woman,
in the bloom a woman waving something.

In his silent 'Flower Sermon',
Siddhartha Gautama held up a flower;
he said nothing.
Time passed, the gathering began to fidget.
Some thought to look wise,
some lowered their eyes in confusion.
Most saw only a flower,
a few saw something waving.

This morning,
I carry a vase of purple Iris to the window.
Outside in the garden, flowers are dancing.
We call it `dancing' when the wind moves them,
but there is no specific word
for what the woman in the flower does
when she is waving.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 8:32 AM
A very interesting piece to ponder.
Ashford Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 3:33 PM
True, I'm still pondering it! Thanks again, Richard.
Ashford Avatar
July 11, 2019 at 6:18 PM
Thanks so much Charmaine. Always good to get feedback.
Chircop Avatar
July 11, 2019 at 2:20 PM
Lovely!
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