The Witnesses of My Life Secrecy

Not for once I kept those rumbles 
Not for once I spilled it through the silence 
In the long way I spoke
Spoke to the vacant air next to my passenger seat

Driving no where upon the limbo
Passing through the droplets rain, I hid my sorrow
Once I locked myself into an argument within the space
With hope the shouts won't be audible beyond the screen

Cliche did fill my stories
But you hid me within the glory and sorrow behind your shield
You are the silent witness which I could lean
No third parties would be in, only the two of us in between

Prayers overshadow our drift
You be the witness in my plead
Nobody's there even see me pray, 
Besides you and my guitar we sank in play

None of living things ever seen
The fragile case of my grim
Only you and the six strings reside in the hidden tide
Only you and the six strings the witnesses of the other side


Author's Note:
Inspired by my car and my guitar as the witnesses behind the story :D
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lamoureux Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 6:51 AM
Good night Yanny, I enjoyed reading this one again.
Guzzi Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 3:35 PM
Yeah I get this one! You're driving and you are working through your problems in the passengerless car! Talking aloud, rumblings of discontent I think and how cool! GOOD one Yannie! Thanks so much for stopping by my writes. Light & Love
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January 21, 2013 at 4:16 PM
Hahaha, oh my God, you really got into this poem, this is really the real situation in here XD, I really amazed by your great prediction in here :D thank you Debbie, you visit in here really make my day :D wishing you a great and wonderful day :D
Lamoureux Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 1:31 PM
I love this Poem Yanny. Very touching, I imagine the sound of your guitar as I am reading your words.
Widjanarko Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 4:54 PM
Thank's Richard, your comments encourage me as always :D
Carrillo Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 8:32 AM
Yanny; This is very beautiful. I enjoyed it very much. Lucilla
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December 13, 2012 at 9:04 AM
Thank you Luci, Your presents always warming my day :D
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