The Witch In the Moon

Written by Gail DeBole
in 1990's

A witch named Neutface LaRue
Always dressed in a yellow TuTu.
A ballet step on her broom
Crashed her into the moon,
Crying, "I've made a terrible Bu Bu!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Laurie Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 7:12 PM
G'day Gail ... very good limerick Gail. Perhaps a GPS on her broom - thanks Gail - Lindsay
Debole Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 4:04 AM
Hi Lindsay, Thank you for your feedback. Great suggestion! Actually have another related limerick - didn't get a chance to post yet - more modern tech involved. Will be posting soon. -Gail
Allison Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 5:01 PM
very witty Gail I do enjoy a good limerick:-) hugs Jan xx
Debole Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 5:05 PM
Hi Jan, Good to hear from you. Glad you enjoyed! - Hugs to you, too, Gail
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