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The Witch- Collaboration With Liam Mc Daid

The WITCH 
A
furore 
in the town,
draped in black gown,
a WITCH is brewing a storm.
Bringing nightfall to the dainty
spiked with malevolence and vanity
spitting a curse from her wicked tongue
       Silently scoffing the blood of old and young 
          eyes of medusa , cursed to the bottom of the sea
      she is the descendent of a dark world of fantasy.
The magic emanates from her ravenous eyes, 
rendering the stories of deceit and lies,  
grimaced into the gloominess,
of shallows and emptiness,
she is brewing a storm
draped in a black
Gown .


© By rEdfiery and Liam Mc Daid 2016

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/16/2016 8:30:00 PM

Love these lines between you and Liam :-) thank you for reading Insecure Attachment :-) Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/15/2016 3:33:00 PM

I just did my first Collaboration with Liam. I hope you are having a good day Red.

Red Fiery
Date: 6/16/2016 2:41:00 AM

it was a stupendous collaboration ...congrats !!! ~ ReD~

Jan Allison

Date: 6/10/2016 11:03:00 AM

such a fabulous dark poem - great collaboration Liam and Red Fiery :-) hugs Jan xx 7

Red Fiery
Date: 6/16/2016 2:49:00 AM

Hugs ~

Red Fiery
Date: 6/16/2016 2:48:00 AM

Dear Allison, I really admire your works too..I strongly believe that you are a wonderful Poetess...~ Red

Judy Ball

Date: 6/9/2016 1:10:00 PM

WoW! Sounds like the witch has her tunic in a knot. She must be mad at somebody about something. Great job here. Kudos to both of you. God Bless and a seven from me. JB

Red Fiery
Date: 6/16/2016 2:47:00 AM

thank you Judy...it's so nice of you ~ Hugs ~Red

Robert Pettit

Date: 6/9/2016 9:35:00 AM

Start putting firewood around the stake. Very descriptive write in a fascinating shape.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/7/2016 5:47:00 PM

Cool! I also like he shape of the piece.

Red Fiery
Date: 6/16/2016 2:49:00 AM

Thank you Ric:))))~ Red

Paul Callus

Date: 6/7/2016 9:11:00 AM

It is a pleasure to be reading this excellent collaboration once again. Full marks to both collaborators...well done Red and Liam! Regards // paul

Red Fiery
Date: 6/16/2016 2:42:00 AM

Thank you paul for enlightening me with your comments~Red~

Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/5/2016 10:09:00 PM

Thanks for checking out my latest poem, Red ... as well as pointing out the mistake on my part. I changed it now with italics and normal font. Nothing wrong with your eyes :)

Red Fiery
Date: 6/16/2016 2:43:00 AM

That poem was really great ...thank you for visiting me ~Cheers Red~

Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/5/2016 5:23:00 PM

Mischievous and brooding ... and even the shape of the poem looks sorta like an eye cut in half. Very vivid images, Red & Liam. I enjoyed the creation.

Red Fiery
Date: 6/16/2016 2:44:00 AM

Thank you Timothy..I really appreciate your kind visits..~ Red ~

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 6/3/2016 12:13:00 PM

Scary...but very creative.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/3/2016 5:03:00 AM

Dark and scary BUT the light of your poetic genius throws out any fear of the heart and leaves the soul free to celebrate poetry at its best! A seven to each dear, Red Fiery and dear Liam! A fav.