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The Wise

To sound wiser I talked less And listened more. Now my lips shrink, Ears droop down, Eyes roll out And head goes down, And behind me, Now people say, “He is so wise He cannot say a word, Only, mm-hmm, mm-hmm.
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Date: 8/22/2020 8:27:00 PM
Yes, sound advice! Supposedly gives the impression you're going for. I like the graphic way you drew it.
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Date: 8/23/2020 4:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sigrid, for this wonderfully great comment!! Have a great Sunday, my friend!

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