The Winter of My Tears

"Alas! The lessening light, the worsening my plight- My face- a somber expression..." excerpt from *a poem by Just That Archaic Poet The summer of my laughter’s passed; my happy skies grow overcast. No meadowlark is singing here. The winter of my tears is near. In vale of shadows, sun hangs low. I sojourn now where chill winds blow. Into November’s gloom I peer. The winter of my tears is near. Before I meet eternity, a snow shall come and bury me, Its brilliance - anguish soon will mirror. The winter of my tears is near. The summer of my laughter’s passed. The winter of my tears is near.
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Barden Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 12:35 AM
I adore this one, my friend ... gorgeous and heart-rending imagery and metaphor. Congrats on your win! :-) <3
Lamoureux Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 8:02 AM
This is eloquently expressed Andrea. Congrats on your win.
Gauthier Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 8:33 PM
Lovely emotional write. Congrats on your very well deserved win, Andrea.
Kalicharan Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 1:13 AM
Wonderful imagery! I enjoyed this immensely... Jenni
Walker Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 8:31 AM
This is one great poem, it mirrors your life. Laughter in Summer, Winter in tears. You had me feeling deeply sad.
Allison Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 2:31 PM
I would have loved to have seen this and some of the others placed much higher - its a winner in my eyes Andrea! Hugs Jan xx a 7 from me:-)
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 4:03 PM
thanks, Jan!
Mohn Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 2:12 PM
True art...spectacular!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 4:04 PM
very nice of you to say.
Stoner Jr Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 1:33 PM
I agree with BG that's a great sonnet,excellent rhyme and rhythm clear message and presented so well. That's a home run in my book.
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 4:04 PM
and thank YOU, kind sir!!
Gorelick Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 7:56 AM
Now I try to be positive about contests..but how this ended up with an HM I will never understand. This is awesome, and should be on top..sigh. congrats anyway my dear. BG
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 10:24 AM
awww, sweetest thing anybody said to me yet today.
Kayode Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 10:32 PM
I enjoy it,congrats on the win Andrea...huggs
May Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 9:45 PM
A lovely poem...Congrats on your win Andrea...
Mehta Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 9:19 PM
Congrats on the win, Andrea
A   Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:33 PM
Andrea, Congratulations, :) I super love and enjoyed all poems, some more than others. Anyways, this was XOOL and had Winter written all over. Stop by my latest blog "Winter Rose" if you'd like. Have fun, reading any poem on my list. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Harper Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 4:19 PM
Very lovely and brave, you are singing with courage in this one Andrea, very nice.
Deschler Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 3:24 PM
I love this poem, Andrea, the imagery is amazing. I can feel the deep emotions and the cold of loneliness. An excellent entry for this contest! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much! :)
Adams Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 8:15 PM
this was a very creative and excellent poem Andrea....one of my favorites in the contest...congrats on your win :)
Gooden Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 5:19 PM
Love the imagery. Poetic brilliance. Keep writing; love your work. Makes me want to write again. Sherese
Anglesey Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 12:21 PM
Hi Andrea, this is a striking revamp. So well crafted and imaged. I am humbled to be placed in a contest with you. Congrats on your well deserved win :)
Lamoureux Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 8:07 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Congratulations, you are a gifted poet.
Anglesey Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 12:29 PM
andrea, good luck in the contest. This is awesome :)
Babcock Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 3:48 PM
Love this sweet poem Andrea. It has such a sad ring to it. Snow is melting today so roads should be nice and slippery tonight. love phyl
Horne Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 4:15 PM
the phone went and I was logged out by the time I got to leave this comment, lol - another beauty here, my friend
Adams Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 7:41 AM
what a beautiful poem you have penned...love everything about this one...he will love it for sure! hugs :) soupmail
Mohammed Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 2:06 PM
Lovely work of art Andrea. Thoroughly enjoyed how your wonderful mind works. I'm free so I will be stopping by to catch up on some of your gems.
Jones Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 8:16 PM
Ditto ditto and this is gorgeous...another one that sings Andrea.....lovely.....
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