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I entered a little contest on the soup Where entries were judged according to Merit and favor and everything good With a judge who knows poetry as they should My entry was scribbled on the back of a card Then written on paper in the form of a poem Soon I came to the computer’s word processor And wrote it all down with dashes and a formula The words came to me through my hopes and ideas Dreams that did soothe me with a muse that bleeds Through insights and feelings that prompt me to see Hues of rich scarlet and gracefully intimate scenes Soon the words beckoned me with their ideas To listen to the deliberation of rhymes and rhythms Signaling delights that fought to be in sentences That formed stanzas broken only by delightful couplets I welcomed the verses so enchanting and fulfilling Calling out to me through the flow of lines and sections Causing me to see that both poetry and prose belong To the writer who listens to the call within their soul Would the judge of my poem see the light it illuminated Or would they be drawn to the sentences that appeased The disillusionment and discouragement that flowed inside The pen who lost sight of the demands that it should win Clutching at straws, I hoped for a wonderful victory With the liquid ebony that milks adjectives and adverbs From the rich prayers that drain through my heart’s veins Soothing and blessing my aspirations with inspirations Clutching at Straws Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann September 19, 2020

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Date: 10/6/2020 6:11:00 AM
Nice imagery Gina. I love the 5th stanza :) Congratulations! {} Linda
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Date: 10/6/2020 5:21:00 AM
- A really deserved winning poem, Regina - CONGRATULATIONS ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/20/2020 5:53:00 PM
Regina, This poem won me over. Good luck poet. -Richard
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Date: 9/20/2020 4:43:00 AM
I wonder what the outcome would be...Love your take on this contest ..On a side note, people who enter contests must remember that all judges are different and see poetry differently... As poetry is abstract and subjective. So how a poem gets on in a contest is only a slight reflection of its quality....
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Date: 9/19/2020 2:07:00 PM
This is so well written and the description of emotion is so well done. I think we all can identify with you feelings here. The pic is excellent. Good luck in the contest my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/19/2020 10:26:00 AM
It's interesting to let a poetry challenge inspire one in this way.I recall writing a few poems similar to this, describing my feelings as I tried the challenge. I enjoyed how you led us through your thought proecess. I hope the judge decides yay instead of nay!
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Date: 9/19/2020 9:12:00 AM
So creative, Gina. You have perfectly described the hopes and dreams we put into our writings. Love "liquid ebony," "words beckoned me" and the smooth integration of the parts of speech. Nicely done. Best wishes for the contest my dear friend. Blessings.
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