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The Wind’s Rhapsody

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Constance's 'Write Five Beautiful Lines Contest ~ 3/13/25

"The earth has music for those who will listen." ~Willam Shakespeare I stand on a cliff overlooking an indigo sea, watching its tranquil water before a storm. Purple and amber clouds billow above me as sunlight reflects upon onyx mountainsides... and the wind plays a rhapsody only I can hear.

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/15/2025 2:54:00 PM

You captured a very tranquil moment Lin, moments like that stay with you forever. Congrats on your win. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 3/15/2025 3:28:00 PM

It would nice to feel tranquil all the time. Thanks, Tom.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/15/2025 9:41:00 AM

That’s so lovely Lin, five beautiful lines, describing a superb view of the sea and its delightful refrain. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Beryl

Lin Lane
Date: 3/15/2025 11:29:00 AM

I just wanted to stand at that vantage point and revel in its beauty. Thanks so much for your sweet comments, Beryl.

Jim Healey

Date: 3/15/2025 9:39:00 AM

Beautiful description, Lin. Well done and congratulations.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/15/2025 11:28:00 AM

Thank you very much, Jim.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/15/2025 4:14:00 AM

This is magnificent. A worthy first place.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/15/2025 6:06:00 AM

That's a very kind comment, Victor. Thank you so much.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2025 2:48:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful win poem, Lin :) - hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 3/15/2025 6:07:00 AM

Merci, Anne-Lise.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/15/2025 2:16:00 AM

Serene. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/15/2025 6:07:00 AM

Thank you very much, thriveni.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/14/2025 6:03:00 PM

The lines are beautiful Lin. The picture too. I'm looking, reading, and hearing the wind you describe. Smiles!!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/15/2025 6:06:00 AM

Wouldn't it be nice if we could transport ourselves into such places that we see in photographs or paintings? I'd be painting all day. Thanks, Duke.