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The Window

Warmth radiates the room, As sweat beads tap the surface. Moisture stains the window, From the ardent steam of love. Vapors fog the glass, With love’s sweet condensation. While fingers streak their trace, Slowly slipping their grip away. As the impervious window, Blushes in complete obscurity. Opaquely hiding love’s surrender, While revealing...honest true love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/5/2010 10:46:00 PM
Very passionate, Raul. We're seeing a whole new dimension to your writing talent in this poem. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/5/2010 4:01:00 PM
Great rendition of luv and its emotional levels Raul... enjoyed this creative write .. as I luv LUV poetry.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" SOUP MAIL...
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Date: 6/4/2010 12:55:00 PM
Now I can see why I have just added my angle on " Who do you miss " relating to Chris's blog. And I have just read his words. Raul, if you are not remembered long after we are gone, I Semaj will be back to address the situation. You are heights above many poets that i know, and I show no disrespect to them. In life there is always better, and you are the better >> James
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Date: 6/4/2010 7:15:00 AM
~~Beautiful~~This is a great way to start my morning reading poetry. I am glad your poetry was among the poetry I have the pleasure to read today. Wishing you a weekend full of love and inspiration Raul. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2010 7:34:00 PM
Wow, Raul....perhaps you have been away building up steam:) !! Nicely done!!
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Date: 6/3/2010 3:20:00 PM
Oh my gosh..another hot poem..read the Highlander and Michaels pieces..just posted. Im going ;to have to have a shower if this keeps up. lolBG
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Date: 6/3/2010 3:14:00 PM
Very beautiful Raul!C elene!
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