The Wind Sway

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wind coming from north. fallen leaves clump together. south of the border

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/11/2022 3:06:00 AM

The wind always plays a game :)

Bill Baker

Date: 1/10/2022 4:44:00 PM

I like it, Lasaad. She says, "you have birds in your branches." He says. "so do you. I keep feeling we are drifting apart, we seem more seperated thank in our youth, my love." lol Have a wonderful week, Lasaad. Bill

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/10/2022 11:18:00 AM

Hello Lasaad, Even the fallen leaves have migrated and are snuggling up together, away from that northerly wind, very expressive and impressive haiku, cheers David

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/10/2022 9:02:00 AM

Great haiku, Lasaad! Blessings, Kim M

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/10/2022 7:45:00 AM

- Wind from the North ... is icy cold :) - An excellent haiku, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)