The Widow's Willing Victim

Standing in a field filled with stones,
I heard the sound of a funeral song.
Hiding behind an old oak tree,
I peered through a Widow's web, just so I could see.

As they dropped her young groom in the dirt,
I thought I saw a tear, I know I saw a smirk.
She held a rose in her hand from the Devil's garden.
As she placed it on the ground, I begged her pardon.

I followed her bread crumbs down a deadly trail.
How long will you mourn before you lift that veil?
You can stop the facade and all that crying.
I'm all in, to be with you I'm just dying.




8/13/19
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Poteet Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 10:12 AM
Very well-worded, Wren. Love the bread crumbs line and the Widow's web. Enjoyable read.
Rushing Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 8:57 PM
Thank you Reason!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 7:49 AM
If one is to choose one’s own poison they might as well enjoy a bit of fun on their journey.
Rushing Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 9:39 AM
I think you are right poison should taste good.
Ashley Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 9:48 PM
Oh, snared from the start.. a darkly desirous and beguiling beauty, Wren.. ‘I peered through a Widow’s web’ - amazing imagery and rhymes.. a gem of a poem! Warmest wishes always my inspiring friend.. Susan
Rushing Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 3:33 AM
Thank you for your kind words my dear friend!
Awtry Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 2:08 PM
Yep he was caught in the web from the start! clever!
Rushing Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 3:32 AM
Thank you P.S.!
Pandit Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 8:01 AM
Excellent write Wren--the widow had it all planned out..ready for the next victim..cleverly done.
Rushing Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 10:33 AM
Thank you Vijay! I always value your opinion my friend! Have a blessed day!
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