The White Pumpkin

I was invited to a pumpkin patch, a thing not happened before,
She was giving away pumpkins, but there was a little flaw
She says her pumpkins are not quite the usual ones we know,
In fact they tend to be quite bright, with a light put in below.

The fact is her pumpkins have grown up all white
She is giving them away because they gave her a little fright.
I decide not to go empty handed as in days gone by,
A return gift for Carol for I decided I would buy.

But no, I would grow something, that I could give with love.
So I sent for some seeds to plant, and prayed to heaven above.
Please let my marrow be the biggest ever seen,
Its not for me it’s for Carol, 
The white growing pumpkin queen.
I would not ask this for myself, but I want to show Carol that
She is not he only one to give things and I want a marrow to give back.

I watered the marrow daily and it grew beyond all expectation
I must have green fingers, or it is all the extra hydration.
I gave thanks to God above for my prayers he must have heard.
It was getting so big now I wondered how I would get it transferred.
And then came the day to harvest the best marrow I have ever seen,
There was a little problem though I found it was not green.
God then spoke to me and I listened to everything he said,
‘You only wanted to show off,  so I made your marrow red,
Now you must still give it ,but with love and with humility
And don t ever again believe, that you can ever, really fool me.’
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 17, 2012 at 9:12 AM
Dear Mandy, Congratulation On YOUR Win in Carol's Contest I knew as soon as I read the Title it was for carol's Contest she has a white Pumpkin Contest Every Year "Purple Peas??" I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege. ..Harry
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September 26, 2012 at 4:33 AM
I can see now, the amount of comments here, that your contest entries were starting to impact, this is a awesome story, and a credit to you... congrats by the way....
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November 17, 2011 at 10:02 PM
Congrats Many on a grand win.. a wow wonder luv..
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November 18, 2011 at 12:33 AM
Thanks x
Freeman Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 4:52 PM
Haa! A wonderfully delightful story Mandy, Congratulations on your worthy poem. Agape, Moses
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November 18, 2011 at 12:34 AM
Thanks x
Taylor Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 4:22 PM
Congrats, Mandy. Great write. Enjoyed. Nice going. xxxRalph
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November 18, 2011 at 12:34 AM
Thanks x
Johnson Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 2:17 PM
In my garden I have never grown a marrow I wonder what this mystery plant could be? I would offer you a gift just like did Carol If you'd grow a special marrow just for me. ongratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 12:36 AM
Thankyou Joyce I just ry to please I'll send you some of my purple peas xx
Brown Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 12:49 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my "What No Orange Pumpkin" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
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November 18, 2011 at 12:38 AM
Even , my pleasure thanks for placing it x
Brown Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 10:42 AM
Thank you for supporting the contest Mandy. Love, Carol
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November 18, 2011 at 12:37 AM
My P;easure thanks x
Lane Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 4:43 AM
It's like a Fairy Tale. I like it very much. Tony
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November 9, 2011 at 5:12 AM
You have the measure of my intelligence xx
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