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Poetic Form: Dramatic Monologue
Inspired: 2024 February 24
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There is so much left unsaid Words will go on forevermore As I sit next to her bed With all the words that needs to be said I hear her feeble breath laborious gasping If I utter a word I know I won't stop But in her condition will she hear any of it In my heart of hearts I hope she does But it will satisfy no one but myself Wishful thinking that will be For I will know the truth of it That it will all be words carried by the winds Words that would satisfy all her questions Words were the answers she needed to hear Words she longed for and clung to life for Words that ... "We're turning the machines off, I'm sorry but she's gone." ... that matters?

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Date: 2/25/2024 11:01:00 AM
This is a heartbreaking poem my friend..
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Hilo Poet
Date: 2/25/2024 4:59:00 PM
Aloha, Silent One. Admittedly, 'tis a bit of conundrum, but--not in contrast or in addition, nor exclusionary--for the reason I gave her the last word, whereto, she exonerated him from any fault or blame. A welcoming sharing, my friend, Mahalo, William
Date: 2/25/2024 5:54:00 AM
So sad, my friend. Your poem tugs the heart. Splendidly delivered.
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Date: 2/25/2024 9:38:00 AM
The measure of loss is incalculable where none be of matter, appreciatung your visit and expressions, Vijay. Aloha, William
Date: 2/25/2024 5:16:00 AM
left me breathless...experienced those same feelings and thoughts with my dad...a poignant poem. I'd like to believe the words matter...that the soul hears them.faving
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Date: 2/25/2024 9:27:00 AM
She struggled for air him for words, but in the end ... it was she who had the last word--weight lifted, amen, Sara. Aloha, William
Date: 2/24/2024 9:20:00 PM
the void witnesses each tremor of heart’s pure intent and thus in the womb of existence, even unvoiced thoughts glisten in the ethereal moonlight
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Date: 2/24/2024 9:30:00 PM
Wondrously amplified, US, your astute nature is well-noted, my friend. Aloha, William

Book: Shattered Sighs