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The Weep Eternal

I slaved hard to subdue my anger, I chained myself deep in my cavern keep Condemned to restless sleep, shielded from the blood full moon Eternal tears I weep I refuse to become a beast ... what they claim I and my people be I won’t relinquish my humanity because of the evil things done to me Spiteful nails were driven into my soul, crucified by words of hate I bear the burden of unconditional forgiveness, I carry it heavy to my grave Though bonds of misery were placed on me, I put my trust in the Lord and He set me free I weep eternal tears, tears of joyous victory Overcoming all tribulation Faced with daily temptation ... Eternal tears I weep, peace only comes when I cry myself to sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/25/2017 5:24:00 PM
Powerful message you spilled here. I really really like it :)
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Date: 5/25/2017 12:22:00 PM
This is a very powerful write , Freddie. I can identify with this one. :)
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Date: 5/25/2017 8:34:00 AM
You are well connected to the emotional realm!
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Date: 5/25/2017 7:52:00 AM
'Tears of joyous victory,' what a wonderful dramatic verse you have penned here Freddie. I enjoyed every line of it. Brilliant 7++ Maria
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