The Weathered House

The wind howls around the old house,
tearing at the faded ivy and whistling 
through the shuttered panes.
Water drips an endless melody
on the cold unyielding floor.

Everything is dark and empty,
oppressive, suffocating and morose.
But now and again, if you listen,
you can hear the distant echoes
and glimpse shadows in the fading light.

Age and neglect have made of this place
a mockery of what it once had been.
So now nothing
just the flicker of an elusive memory,
tugging at my senses and teasing my mind’s eye.

At the edge of hearing there is wild music,
or is it just the wind?
Then a furtive laugh, a whispered remark,
a child's lonesome cry drift around me.
Impossible! What can they be?
Only phantom noises from long, long ago.

But memories live yet, deep in this ancient abode.
Soaked into and sealed in the warped stairwell,
the cold and empty fireplace,
the gathered dust and debris of a hundred empty,
silent years.

I stand still! Rigid! My head strangely tilted 
and for a second I understand.
I know whose that strange unsettling laugh
and see the coldness of those passionless eyes
and bow my head in pain and horror 
of that pitiful,
desolate cry.

16 November, 1997

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Date: 6/26/2014 2:09:00 AM
Brilliant imagery it sent a shiver down my spine when i read it. Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 4/19/2022 7:52:00 AM
I TRY TO WRITE AS I IMAGINE IN MY MIND
Date: 6/26/2014 1:51:00 AM
Very well written Athena. I could easily picture these very scenes of desolation and coldness...love, deb
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Date: 4/19/2022 7:53:00 AM
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