The Way It Is

bliss rapture peaks without seeking love’s cheeks blushing

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Sand Blown

Date: 7/12/2023 3:10:00 PM

...wowza...nice write.....'rap sure peaks' ....sounds a bit like a pop song.....stan

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/12/2023 7:25:00 PM

Bill Baker

Date: 7/12/2023 8:44:00 AM

Interesting form of poetry, Unseeking Seeker. Thanks for sharing a poem of bliss. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/12/2023 9:16:00 AM

Thanks, Bill. Give this form a try; it’s not as easy as it looks

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/12/2023 8:25:00 AM

Interesting lines penned. Sara

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/12/2023 8:43:00 AM

Thank you, Sara ~ even after so long, I find this form challenging