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The Water's Edge

There is something about the water’s edge To swim, to walk or to stand and look Ripples, waves or calm reflections to see To sit together, watch clouds float on water Or follow the sunset’s glimmering path To hear the language that reaches the shore While we share our thoughts, hand in hand Then, part the surface with soft circles - To frame our hearts - Heidi Sands 5/21/18

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/22/2018 2:00:00 PM

how enchanting is your poem, heidi... well done!..huggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/22/2018 2:56:00 PM

Thank you Nette :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/22/2018 8:26:00 AM

Just so beautiful Heidi. I can see the lovers reflections. Happy Tuesday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/22/2018 9:04:00 AM

Thank you Mike. Happy Tuesday! :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/22/2018 4:53:00 AM

I adore being at water's edge! In Greece I have the opportunity to do it very often for the shore is not far away! The imagery you depict reflects reality at its best my friend, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/22/2018 6:27:00 AM

That sounds nice Demetrios. It is wonderful to be nearby like that. Thank you. :)

Lunita Blanca

Date: 5/21/2018 5:50:00 PM

Oh my friend, how simple yet so powerful imagery.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/21/2018 5:57:00 PM

Thank you Carlos! I appreciate your visits and comments :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/21/2018 4:10:00 PM

Sound of peace at the water's edge..delicate and serene depiction.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/21/2018 4:14:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. Nice to hear :)