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The Watermelon Thieves

THE WATERMELON THIEVES Once when I was oh so young, My mom decided she, Would show us where some melons grew, Beneath some large orange trees. A farmer man she knew of, Grew them there she said, So folks would leave alone the fruit, That grew above their head. The melons were okay to take. Just let the oranges be, So off we went to pick some, My mom, my sis and me. I was only five years old, So I sat in the car, With Mama's friend who drove us there, No light from moon or stars; Because the orange trees blocked their light, And I was sore afraid, Because it was so dark in there, Hidden in the glade. Suddenly I saw my mom, Running like the wind, Right behind her came my sis, A melon 'neath each limb. Then in a flash my mom went down, She tripped and broke her melons. "Run Ruth, Run!" I heard her say, They're runnin' and they're yellin'. Mother! Wait! I heard Sis call, For she had gone down too, Stepped in a rotten one and fell, They both were in a stew. A flashlight beam then pierced the dark, They made the car just barely; And we took off just like a shot, Took out the fence gate squarely. We made it back home just past one. They laughed until they cried. I was so young I just sat there, Agape with my eyes wide. My mother had skinned both her shins, My sister, she smelled funny, Because that melon she stepped in, Was rotten and real funky. Some thought my mom as mothers go, Not what you'd call high scoring, But I can tell you life back home, For sure was never boring. Judy Ball FOR NATHAN D.'s - LET'S PUT A SMILE ON MY FACE CONTEST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/28/2012 9:15:00 PM
I love this kind of poem from you where you relive your childhood!! It's so cool. I clicked and clicked and finally found this one of yours I had never seen before. listen, I want to tell you what "lies concealed" I'll take it to Soupmail. GIve me a few moments to write it. Then I am getting off I finally finished all my comments (check out Susan's latest contest. Find a GEM that hardly anyone has ever commented on and enter it in her contest.)
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Date: 7/5/2011 6:10:00 AM
That would have been a wild night! :D
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/5/2011 6:21:00 AM
It scared me but I was just little. It's a fun memory though. Thanks bunches for stopping by. Glad you liked it. God Bless JB
Date: 6/29/2011 12:04:00 PM
I grew up in an Irish/Italian neighborhood. Many of the Italians made their own wine. I remember getting caught stealing grapes. This was a great read. Thanks for stirring my memories. BobQ
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Judy Ball
Date: 6/29/2011 12:54:00 PM
I am half Sicilian so I know about Nunu making his own wind. Glad you enjoyed this piece. God Bless, JB
Date: 6/29/2011 11:16:00 AM
Judy this one took me back to my child hood, when my brother and i would steal watermelons from this guys's garden and i got caught and fell down, but got away. this piece of delightful poetry really cracked me up, and i am putting it in favorites. thank you for commenting on Three Baby Birds, you know we got a lot of rain one day and i have not heard them since.
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Judy Ball
Date: 6/29/2011 11:34:00 AM
Thank you so much James for stopping by and I'm glad you got your daily giggle from this true story. So sorry to hear about the baby birds. I do hope they just left the nest. God Bless, JB

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