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The Water

I am in love with your quiet rage I sleep and wake with it There is sure value in your rising Yet even at your lowest, You live You gift October 10, 2017

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Al Juman

Date: 8/1/2018 4:06:00 AM

this is enlightening --very nice Laura

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/13/2018 3:41:00 AM

Happy to read your comment, Al. I really appreciate your kind words and for taking the time to stop by and read this one. I was at much peace when writing it. <3 ~Laura

James Inman

Date: 12/9/2017 12:09:00 AM

This short piece is lovely, I love listening to the sound of the ocean or a waterfall or raging river or the trickle of a gentle stream.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/9/2017 12:51:00 AM

Thank you sweet James. I love that too.... i listen to rain and water sounds probably every night to help me sleep. I wrote this in October in Cambria, Ca.. a small town on the coast. All I needed was an open window... the ocean lulled me to sleep. You would have loved it! <3~Laura