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The Watch

Assuming the watch
Among the fallen heroes
Symbolic eagle
Touching American hearts
A patriotic sun rise

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/22/2014 12:00:00 PM

Hi Vince, once again.. Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by to view, every featured poem, on the soups Home Page. Take Care & Have Fun this coming week..... Luve Linda

Skat A

Date: 2/28/2014 7:45:00 AM

Vince, beautiful. love how its touching the glorious hearts and view. Skat

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2011 10:44:00 PM

Vince,great tanka, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d.

James Fraser

Date: 10/8/2011 2:25:00 PM

Many a watch has been witnessed Vince, and many a watch will continue to be witnessed. And the sun will continue to grace the fallen, a sun they so deserved to see in a lifetime. Many thanks for your kind comments. Have a most lovely weekend :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/24/2011 4:30:00 PM

I can feel the emotion and searching in this Vince, a well put togther piece.. and i believe congratulations are in order from the others comments.!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2011 9:34:00 PM

oh, wait. I see it looking down farther, so you DID get a win. I sure hope so. Congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2011 9:33:00 PM

well, this is quite good. But I see no win, dang it.

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/28/2011 11:42:00 AM

Such a beautiful poem. It not only touches American hearts, it touches Canadian hearts too. Well done. Lee

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 8/18/2011 7:51:00 AM

a majestic, honorable write, Vince. Conducive to meditation. Great job and deserving win in anyone's book

Elaine George

Date: 8/13/2011 7:33:00 AM

And touching my heart too, dear Vince. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Kash Poet

Date: 8/11/2011 9:09:00 PM

Beautiful Tanka Vince...congrats on your win.

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/11/2011 3:53:00 PM

I love your Tanka Vince especially your last line.. Congratulations on your win ;) Wilma

David Williams

Date: 8/11/2011 1:59:00 PM

hey Vince, congrats on your win, David

Jack Horne

Date: 8/11/2011 1:31:00 PM

Many conrats to you, Vince : )

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/11/2011 9:27:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of carolyn,Vince

John Freeman

Date: 8/11/2011 7:53:00 AM

Vince, Many congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn's contest, Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/11/2011 7:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn's contest Vince. Love,Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/10/2011 8:59:00 PM

This amazing photograph indeed, does touch the American hearts, or hearts of anyone who has lost a loved one in war. Lately, it stirs up my thoughts of our recently lost Navy Seal heroic troops, my grandson, (now in the Navy)...has high hopes on becoming one. God protect and bless each brave young man out there. Nice to see you here! :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/10/2011 7:56:00 PM

Nice to see you win Vince! Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/10/2011 3:53:00 PM

So many amazing entries, Vince, and yours is among them. (Wonder how that "box" got in the third line.) Congratulations on your win in the Bald Eagle in the Cemetery contest! I judged blindly and there were many great entries, so you should feel proud. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/9/2011 4:49:00 PM

Lovely take on the picture, Vince

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