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The Warm-Up

The cute way your cheeks turn red when I catch you watching me; the rush when we barely touch. There’s nothing hotter. Quat-Ro Your Four Line Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/23/2020 8:14:00 PM

Sweet sizzle! Seems like a youthful innocent love, Andrea. So lovely. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan

L. J. Carber

Date: 11/20/2020 1:29:00 PM

Short but sweet, very sweet, Andrea

Frances Schiavina

Date: 11/20/2020 11:35:00 AM

Returning congratulations. That's a poem with a smile and playful originality.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/19/2020 5:03:00 PM

a GOOD one, Andrea! Congrats. Janice

John Watt

Date: 11/19/2020 2:18:00 PM

That's the main reason I wear a mask, so people can't see me blushing, haha! Congrats for your "Quat-Ro".

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/19/2020 6:54:00 AM

Hi Andrea, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

James Inman

Date: 1/3/2016 9:25:00 AM

Playful write Andrea.

Skat A

Date: 12/29/2015 6:04:00 PM

ANDREA..AWESOME......WIN....SKAT

Paul Callus

Date: 12/29/2015 11:21:00 AM

Aww love this one! It has a feel of innocent sensuality about it; takes me back to my younger days:) Congratulations, Andrea! ~ paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/29/2015 1:21:00 AM

Wow loved the spark in this lovely write dear Andrea.. brilliantly done..congrats on fine win!

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 12/28/2015 8:51:00 PM

Hard to keep it a musing with electricity like that, ha ha SuZ

Susan Gentry

Date: 12/28/2015 8:11:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea! Very sensual, actually beyond that lol You did good.

Viv Wigley

Date: 12/28/2015 7:29:00 PM

Congrats on your sizzling little piece, Andrea. And all the best for 2016, Viv x

Michael Tor

Date: 12/28/2015 6:04:00 PM

Love this one Andrea. Congratulations on your win!

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/28/2015 4:42:00 PM

Nicely done, Andrea! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

John Lawless

Date: 12/28/2015 3:44:00 PM

WHOA....Andrea....the "playbeforeforeplay" Great little poem.

Frederic Parker

Date: 12/28/2015 2:40:00 PM

Congratulations my poetic friend, a nice blush.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/28/2015 1:07:00 PM

many congrats Andrea :-) I wrote so many different lines but still couldnt come up with a poem good enough to post:-(hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 12/28/2015 1:01:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on your win! I love this, so much is said in such few words. Well deserved Andrea *smiles* -luloo

Jack Horne

Date: 8/17/2011 10:39:00 AM

What a sweet piece - I thought I'd read your earliest poem posted. I was always blushing at girls when I was younger

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/22/2011 11:58:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea, on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Red". Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/20/2011 12:39:00 AM

oops- congrats for this one sweetie :) hugs

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/20/2011 12:38:00 AM

ooh wee I somehow missed this one? I sure miss so much of your writes, sorry :( I have to seriously catch up with you ---love this one too and i see it's a winner- hopefully it placed high? & aack I haven't even written one -- I am starting from total scratch? & a sonnet too?? good luck to me! what am I thinking?! & I have to leave in a bit-- if I can't enter it, boohoo

Kristina Reid-Hansen

Date: 2/10/2011 6:18:00 AM

I like this=0)

John Beam

Date: 2/7/2011 9:53:00 PM

Thanks for comment, this one is not quite the opposite but still cool and congrats on win