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waitress serves chicken ~ a diner jokes this tastes fowl she is not amused ~~

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Viv Wigley

Date: 3/13/2018 1:58:00 AM

Haha, this reminds me of the diner in the Chinese restaurant complaining to the waiter, 'this tastes rubbery' and he said 'ah, thank you very much'. Fun Senryu, Tom. Regards, Viv

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/13/2018 2:41:00 AM

Thank you Viv, I prefer Indian to Chinese, find it too bouncy and tastes wong.And on that note lol

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/13/2018 1:17:00 AM

Well you can't win them all. (: Lovely little senryu served for the reader today. Always, Laura

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/13/2018 2:39:00 AM

Thanks very much Laura, glad you enjoyed it.

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/12/2018 11:35:00 PM

But I am--greatly! Well done, Tom. Unlike the chicken:)

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/13/2018 2:38:00 AM

Thank you Joe, glad you liked it.

Pat Adams

Date: 3/12/2018 4:02:00 PM

Ha! Good one Tom. Waitress must of thought she was at work or something!..........pat

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/12/2018 4:08:00 PM

Haha, It did end well, diner saw the error of his ways and gave her a big tip.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/12/2018 2:06:00 PM

LOL - really funny, Tom. You must be a joy to live with! A laugh a minute!

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/12/2018 2:38:00 PM

Thanks Line, I try to look on the bright side, there's enough gloom in the world, I have a serious side as well (sometimes)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/12/2018 9:16:00 AM

lol Tom very funny from an ex waitress its one joke i'd not heard lol:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/12/2018 9:33:00 AM

Thanks Jan, you always get a smart Alec who has something to say, usually a stag party.

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 3/12/2018 8:55:00 AM

Lol. This is an adorable write, Tom.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/12/2018 8:59:00 AM

Thank you Rhoda, glad you enjoyed it. Tom

Sneha Rv

Date: 3/12/2018 8:42:00 AM

Oh haha :)) Like the famous "we are not amused" supposed to have been said by Queen Victoria xD

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/12/2018 8:57:00 AM

Lol Yes Sneha, I bet her chicken did not taste fowl.

Maria Williams

Date: 3/12/2018 8:03:00 AM

I wouldn't be amused either Tom. She should have told him to tell it to the Chef - Then he would be faced with the ire of this big guy who carved up the fowl. Lol. Loved it

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/12/2018 8:16:00 AM

Thanks Maria, not that chef who looks like a sumo wrestler lol