The Wait

The sun has long receded from the sky, Pallid gloom invades the wintry air, Morbid silence hangs over, Memory sleeps like hibernating toads. The trees stand bare with no leaves to array, The Earth lies shielded in its icy crust, There is stillness, the stillness of the grave, Breaking it, a fox is heard howling afar. Solitary lies he, in his battered shack, With a run out lantern throwing pale light, It burns sending spouts of fume, Like the last breath of the dying soul. He listens intently for advancing steps, Of a long awaited friend, sure to come, To deliver him of his baneful state, To row him away across the frozen seas
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 7:47 PM
Absolutely intriguing - every line, every stanza. This is magic AND enchantment, Valsa! FAVE time for me. Thank you, Gershon
Brown Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 5:22 PM
Valsa, This is a place I don't think I want to be. It feels like hell. "Memory sleeps like hibernating toads. " Impressive words, great imagery, vision. Blessings ~ Debra
Leffanta Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 10:27 AM
Rowing across a frozen sea does not sound like a rescue! Aloha!
Brul Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 7:01 AM
What a magical write!!! Your imagery stands out!! I like the "hibernating toads", " a fox howling from afar" .Masterfully done!
George Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 8:21 AM
Thanks a lot Jez ! When I read your comments, I feel I am a good poet! :) Thanks dear friend for boosting my ego ! :)
Pandit Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 5:20 AM
Splendidly done to craft this poignant tale. I feel the stillness of grave in your words.
George Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 5:57 AM
Thank you so much Vijay ! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 2:55 AM
Brr. I feel as if I'm there.
George Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 4:44 AM
Please don't place yourself in his place ! You have many more happy years ahead ! Thank you Victor !
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