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She never saw his colors bright but oh how small, how sweet, how light she could not see his beak of brown but when he chirped she lost her frown He danced he flew but yes he knew that she was blind and feeling blue he landed on her shoulder still, to song her with his warble trill She softly hummed to him a song with braille, upon his brow of long and as the night fell on the lawn the winds arrived and he flew on She never gazed upon his frame, but knew by heart, that he was tame. July 17, 2021

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Date: 7/20/2021 10:42:00 AM
A lovely and a very sweet poem which flows very nicely!!
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Date: 7/18/2021 6:21:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Mystic, love the imagery and flow. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/18/2021 1:20:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Vie Rose - A pretty colorful bird ... it is welcome to visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/18/2021 11:26:00 AM
Well done, and I agree we can not match bird brains for sighs!
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Date: 7/18/2021 10:34:00 AM
Pleasure to read this poem, I did enjoy it...Delice
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Date: 7/17/2021 10:21:00 PM
Beautiful and lovely images in your sonnet. Enjoyed reading. Thanks
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Date: 7/18/2021 9:27:00 AM
Thank you Rama, for your comment and visit,
Date: 7/17/2021 9:56:00 PM
A visit no to be forgotten. So birds know Braille too Excellent sonnet. Hugs
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Date: 7/18/2021 9:27:00 AM
Hi Victor, yes birds sense everything, smarter then humans, thanks for the visit
Date: 7/17/2021 8:30:00 PM
An enchanting sonnet, Vie! Sweet and lyrical. Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/18/2021 9:26:00 AM
Thank you Kim, all the best
Date: 7/17/2021 5:44:00 PM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, the song of the bird sang the lady enjoyed. She could not see the bird yet enjoyed the visit and song. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 7/17/2021 5:10:00 PM
This is such a sweet little sonnet that just carried my like a song.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 7/18/2021 9:26:00 AM
thank you Jeanne, much appreciate your visit
Date: 7/17/2021 3:56:00 PM
It was a delightful visit--splendidly done, Vienna.
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Date: 7/18/2021 9:26:00 AM
thank you for your presence Vijay, have a blessed day
Date: 7/17/2021 3:28:00 PM
So beautiful.. I love it. This is brilliant. Love always and God bless you too, Love, Gina
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Date: 7/18/2021 9:25:00 AM
Birds are so sensitive and smart, thanks for the visit Gina

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