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The Violin of Old

The violin seems to float in space, the bow slipping and sliding over my heart, the glow of tears falling down to earth, yet it stirs the silent wings of butterflies, fluttering as if pulling an endless thread from my silhouette. A dark gypsy soul with the moon shines, arms push and pull each note, like a sullen lullaby. The knockabout on ebony waves, shoulders the weight with a mystery of long raven hair, ruthless sadness. Vibrations of vibrancy, beautifully rumble in the ear, creating introspections of smoke and mirrors. The years ebb and flow, the fear long gone, steel tears flow. The song is sung, not with rhetoric, but rhapsody. The violin of old seems to float in space the bow…

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Date: 9/23/2024 12:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this beautiful "The Violin of Old" write. Great Ending... Have fun day writing away...............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2024 1:08:00 PM
Thank you, Paula! :)
Date: 8/19/2024 1:03:00 AM
A Glorious Violin, Indeed! Isn't it just wonderful and miraculous how He gives us...beauty for ashes. Enjoyed, thank you. luv~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2024 9:38:00 AM
We serve such a glorious and good God! Hugs and blessings ~ Joyce
Date: 8/14/2024 11:15:00 AM
Simply BEAUTIFUL. A Masterpiece. Uplifting and Inspiring - Charming and Delightful. Reading over again, I feel a heavy burden has been lifted from my shoulders - sheer weightlessness - as if standing in front of a favourite, dreamy, Chagall. Thank You So Much, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2024 1:07:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words! Love that you saw Chagall in this. He’s a favorite artist of mine! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 8/13/2024 11:22:00 PM
Wonderful! A favorite.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2024 4:44:00 AM
Thank you for fave! I appreciate! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2024 4:36:00 AM
Thank you for fave! I appreciate! :)
Date: 8/13/2024 8:00:00 PM
'the bow slipping and sliding over my heart' -- Exquisite line of poetry, my friend. ~ Violin Fan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/13/2024 8:09:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! :)
Date: 8/13/2024 4:15:00 PM
This is awesome and I love the terrain a fave
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/13/2024 6:48:00 PM
Thank you for the fave. Feel so honored! xoxo
Date: 8/13/2024 2:38:00 PM
Inviting tears, dear Kim- "introspections of smoke and mirrors" " the fear long gone" and more...beautiful writing, from a truly lovely soul, who writes lovely...<3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/13/2024 6:47:00 PM
You always encourage me, Paige! Thank you so much! xoxo
Date: 8/13/2024 2:17:00 PM
Kim this is beautiful! It has a melodic flow and a somber sort of peace! “A dark gypsy soul with the moon shines, arms push and pull each note, like a sullen lullaby.” Love these lines poetess!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/13/2024 6:47:00 PM
Thanks so much, Karen! xxoo

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