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The Vicious Circle

The Vicious Circle HE Abuse had begun when he knew youth and pain Evolving into a mean lion with rage Continued to grow with his memories intact That lay dormant when he searched for his dreams Then he married the one when he had found Love With an **** routine he followed the world When spats became anger then he would respond His incubus hidden but waiting to stir To beat and abuse his past and his wife SHE She had grown up with love and and nurtured this theme To seek someone blessed with the sweet gift of Love And marry the one who would promise her bliss As time continued on his hidden rage grew To punish critique with power anew At times sorrow given then taken with force The force outweighed sorrow with no end in sight Then children would come to sample remorse THEY Mommy and Daddy would hold hands and laugh But Daddy got mad when she said something wrong Then echoed his anger and we cringed in fear We sought Mommy’s love, she had so much to share To balance the loss of our Daddy’s care Do vicious circles end and begin again She asserted herself and gave him a choice To kill her then he would silence her voice For he would be dead when his Ides day would come He beat her again but kept her alive His incubus died by a Colt .45 Lets Talk About it Contest Sponsored by Richard Lamoureux July 30, 2017 *I don’t mean to ply satire on this serious subject but I have no sympathy or empathy for anyone of this ilk.

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Date: 9/2/2017 9:17:00 PM
Very powerful write, Ralph - congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/2/2017 7:15:00 PM
Congratulations Ralph on your fine placement with your powerful poem! :)
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Date: 9/2/2017 12:39:00 PM
Congrats Ralph!
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Date: 8/18/2017 8:26:00 PM
Wow Ralph, a captivating write so excellently expressing the cycle and sadness of domestic violence and its rippling effect. A great write :)
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Date: 8/17/2017 12:48:00 PM
I worked with abused women and there children and you describe it spot on. Good work.
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Date: 8/10/2017 4:14:00 AM
A very sad write, a very sad situation where children have to live through this. My heart weeps in a case like this. You portrayed it so well Ralph, the best of luck in the contest....Maria
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 8/10/2017 1:25:00 PM
THANK YOU, MARIA.
Date: 8/9/2017 8:25:00 PM
Abuse is abuse and should be shown for what it is always. A very thought provoking write here.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 8/10/2017 1:26:00 PM
I agree with you totally, Lewis.
Date: 8/7/2017 4:59:00 PM
Very well said--quite an emotional play!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 8/8/2017 4:48:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay.
Date: 8/2/2017 8:43:00 PM
Hi Gary: Thank you for sharing. As you have seen in the other comments, I have had the sad experience knowing people in this unfortunate situation.
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Date: 8/2/2017 6:17:00 PM
Hello Ralph, Best of Luck in Richard's contest with this very sad and passionately-moving free verse. This was quite riveting to read. It's so sad that terrible stuff like this happens in our world today. A truly powerful write in every respect!! Excellent Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 7/31/2017 10:37:00 PM
Nicely done, Ralph..Abuse is abuse no matter what...my siblings and had gone through the same thing growing up, but at the time we thought it was natural until I was old enough and threaten to kill him.. that is what happens when they drink.. ~*
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 8/1/2017 8:25:00 PM
Hi Eve: I share the sorrow you went through as I know of people who have had your experience.
Date: 7/31/2017 11:58:00 AM
Thanks for commenting on my poem and for entering this significant piece.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 7/31/2017 12:44:00 PM
Hi Richard: Check your email.
Date: 7/31/2017 7:49:00 AM
Hi Debbie: Thanks for sharing: I did know a young girl that was abused by her father and she was all screwed up. I tried to help but I wasn't professional enough. God watch over her
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 8/2/2017 7:29:00 PM
I wasn't enough to help my ex either for decades I accepted the blame.
Date: 7/30/2017 8:15:00 PM
I have nothing to say, Ralph. If I were near I would give you a hug. Light & Love
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