The Vicious Circle

The Vicious Circle


HE
Abuse had begun when he knew youth and pain
Evolving into a mean lion with rage
Continued to grow with his memories intact
That lay dormant when he searched for his dreams
Then he married the one when he had found Love
With an **** routine he followed the world
When spats became anger then he would respond
His incubus hidden but waiting to stir
To beat and abuse his past and his wife

SHE
She had grown up with love and and nurtured this theme
To seek someone blessed with the sweet gift of Love
And marry the one who would promise her bliss
As time continued on his hidden rage grew
To punish critique with power anew
At times sorrow given then taken with force
The force outweighed sorrow with no end in sight
Then children would come to sample remorse

THEY
Mommy and Daddy would hold hands and laugh
But Daddy got mad when she said something wrong
Then echoed his anger and we cringed in fear
We sought Mommy’s love, she had so much to share
To balance the loss of our Daddy’s care

Do vicious circles end and begin again
She asserted herself and gave him a choice
To kill her then he would silence her voice
For he would be dead when his Ides day would come 
He beat her again but kept her alive
His incubus died by a Colt .45

Lets Talk About it Contest
Sponsored by Richard Lamoureux
July 30, 2017

*I  don’t mean to ply satire on this serious subject but I have no sympathy or empathy for anyone of this ilk.
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Barden Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 9:17 PM
Very powerful write, Ralph - congrats on your win!
Ashley Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 7:15 PM
Congratulations Ralph on your fine placement with your powerful poem! :)
Pandit Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 12:39 PM
Congrats Ralph!
Ashley Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 8:26 PM
Wow Ralph, a captivating write so excellently expressing the cycle and sadness of domestic violence and its rippling effect. A great write :)
Cresswell Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 12:48 PM
I worked with abused women and there children and you describe it spot on. Good work.
Williams Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 4:14 AM
A very sad write, a very sad situation where children have to live through this. My heart weeps in a case like this. You portrayed it so well Ralph, the best of luck in the contest....Maria
Sergi Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 1:25 PM
THANK YOU, MARIA.
Raynes Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 8:25 PM
Abuse is abuse and should be shown for what it is always. A very thought provoking write here.
Sergi Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 1:26 PM
I agree with you totally, Lewis.
Pandit Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 4:59 PM
Very well said--quite an emotional play!
Sergi Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 4:48 PM
Thank you, Vijay.
Sergi Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 8:43 PM
Hi Gary: Thank you for sharing. As you have seen in the other comments, I have had the sad experience knowing people in this unfortunate situation.
Bateman Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 6:17 PM
Hello Ralph, Best of Luck in Richard's contest with this very sad and passionately-moving free verse. This was quite riveting to read. It's so sad that terrible stuff like this happens in our world today. A truly powerful write in every respect!! Excellent Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Roper Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 10:37 PM
Nicely done, Ralph..Abuse is abuse no matter what...my siblings and had gone through the same thing growing up, but at the time we thought it was natural until I was old enough and threaten to kill him.. that is what happens when they drink.. ~*
Sergi Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 8:25 PM
Hi Eve: I share the sorrow you went through as I know of people who have had your experience.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 11:58 AM
Thanks for commenting on my poem and for entering this significant piece.
Sergi Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 12:44 PM
Hi Richard: Check your email.
Sergi Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 7:49 AM
Hi Debbie: Thanks for sharing: I did know a young girl that was abused by her father and she was all screwed up. I tried to help but I wasn't professional enough. God watch over her
Guzzi Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 7:29 PM
I wasn't enough to help my ex either for decades I accepted the blame.
Guzzi Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 8:15 PM
I have nothing to say, Ralph. If I were near I would give you a hug. Light & Love
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