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The Vial of Scent - 8 Words

In the dank night, windows ajar, I look across at unshuttered rooms, And see my neighbor quite by happenstance. Her curtain flutters in the buoyant air. I see her at her mirror hold a vial of scent— Perchance I’ll see her daub a bit behind one ear, The fragrance wafting through the courtyard On the humid breeze, like a hushed voice Praying out of sight. Ah, the tenacious folly Of hope, to catch the last whispers of romance! February 13, 2019 Note: This poem was written for John Hamilton's "Eight Word Poem Challenge - Bardenesque" contest. The eight words to be used were: wafting, daub, whispers, dank, flutters, perchance, folly, and happenstance. The requested form was free verse; the length: 10 to 40 lines; the subject, "a romantic encounter".

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Date: 2/23/2019 11:00:00 PM
Ah scent, really adds to a romance and poem, good work JP, enjoyed the read.
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Date: 2/23/2019 11:26:00 PM
Thanks, Sheri!
Date: 2/21/2019 5:21:00 PM
Wonderfully done JP you obviously have a talent I've not yet discovered, so well done congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 2/21/2019 5:58:00 PM
I very much appreciate your kind words -- generally, I get very little feedback, and yours is most encouraging and valuable. Your choice of words was quite perspicacious (I don't enter many of such contests as the words tend to be mostly uninspiring). Thanks again and be well, John!
Date: 2/13/2019 8:55:00 PM
Lovely poem, JP. Enjoyed.
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Date: 2/13/2019 10:05:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line... I never know, with these challenges employing a list of (perhaps not entirely-) random words...

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